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Array ( [sid] => 71323 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She [time] => 2004-11-13 09:27:22 [hometext] => I don't know...I just wrote it. [bodytext] => A being so sweet
a delicate treat
If only her wall I coud break down
defeat

a smile that would light up even the darkest room
but she rarely lets it slip past
escape
her gloom

I wish I could find the words to describe
the incredible
beautiful
vibe

that eminates from voice
body
and eyes
imagine a fire glowing sunrise
over an ocean so pure
it would only make you realize
your immoralities

she is my disease
inflicting me
with her
perfection
and rejection

to touch
to feel
would be too unreel
for someone like me
like me...
she would never
could never
let it
be.... [comments] => 8 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Rxqueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

She

Contributed by Rxqueen on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:27:22 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

A being so sweet
a delicate treat
If only her wall I coud break down
defeat

a smile that would light up even the darkest room
but she rarely lets it slip past
escape
her gloom

I wish I could find the words to describe
the incredible
beautiful
vibe

that eminates from voice
body
and eyes
imagine a fire glowing sunrise
over an ocean so pure
it would only make you realize
your immoralities

she is my disease
inflicting me
with her
perfection
and rejection

to touch
to feel
would be too unreel
for someone like me
like me...
she would never
could never
let it
be....

Copyright © Rxqueen ... [ 2004-11-13 09:27:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:50:10 AM AEST
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Hey cool poem, painted some reaaly unreal visuals, and in words that flowed and danced, awesome write.

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by winged on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:58:44 AM AEST
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Wow, I found that really moving and powerful, a really great write, thanks!!!!!

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by taryn on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:37:43 AM AEST
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great write!

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by Avis_Nigra on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:57:23 AM AEST
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I like how you let the words fall... how you use the shape to manipulate the content, very nice read.

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitolyn on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:13:15 AM AEST
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i saw everything you said.
good job!

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by CAUGHTinAdream on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:14:46 AM AEST
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Yet again, great job! I loved it, and i can relate to it. Keep it up =)

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:28:54 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem I loved how it flowed as well
as the imagery. Well written... don't let people
get you down in the forums!!!!

Bobo (Joel)

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:29:44 PM AEST
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Great write...

~!*!~hugs~!*!~
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