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[sid] => 71309
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[aid] => mick
[title] => My final good bye.
[time] => 2004-11-13 05:05:28
[hometext] => Here’s my final good bye.
[bodytext] => I’m all pumped up,
With what,
I’ve got,
To do.
So this is it,
My good bye.
To all,
Of you.
I can’t go into detail,
‘Coz it’s,
Time to,
Leave now.
But this is,
My last good bye.
Before,
I leave for town.
So here,
It is.
My ‘final’,
Good bye.
It’s time for me to go now,
And attempt,
Suicide…
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 237
[topic] => 36
[informant] => deathdrop
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 4
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
My final good bye.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 05:05:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I’m all pumped up,
With what,
I’ve got,
To do.
So this is it,
My good bye.
To all,
Of you.
I can’t go into detail,
‘Coz it’s,
Time to,
Leave now.
But this is,
My last good bye.
Before,
I leave for town.
So here,
It is.
My ‘final’,
Good bye.
It’s time for me to go now,
And attempt,
Suicide…
Copyright ©
deathdrop
... [
2004-11-13 05:05:28]
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Re: My final good bye.
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by inoc on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 06:38:29 AM AEST
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LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR POEMS DEATHDROP
Hope this is not a final poem as you are valuable on YPDC
and hope you don't mind me writing what I am about to say...but here goes...[not sure you are a believer in God...?.sorry if you don't believe but God loves you and does not want you to commit suicide.]
*just a footnote*
suicide is never the final goodbye
we all will face everything that is/was done in our lives again....we can't excape it...and we should not kill....
so I suggest strongly
humble yourself to GOD [and believe that He will fix all that is wrong in your life in Christ's name] and HE will straighten your path in life
and you WILL be finally happy....
just let God do it in HIS time....but you must believe and have faith that this miracle will happen,,,honestly miracles do happen...
{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}
cheers!~ |
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Re: My final good bye.
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 07:17:48 AM AEST
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I have to agree with the first comment. Your poetry is good you share with the worls your thoughts your hope your life is written down for all to read. What ever has brought you to this final good bye. Would be a injustie for your words are true in which you write. You have the heart and soul of a Great poet. And i also would like to contiune to read more.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: My final good bye.
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by screwup on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 07:34:40 AM AEST
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Rosie,
please...please...DON'T DO IT!!!! I don't wanna get on here next time and find out that you are dead. you can make it through this if you try. and if you suceed you will be a better person that you already are. you can't leave me alone on YPDC. we all need you here. think of how sad everyone would be. think of the people that care for you. you just can't do this to us. i know it seems like sometimes we don't care, but we DO. i will be torn apart if you do this to yourself. ABSOLUTELY TORN APART. period. you have made threats in the past and didn't go through with them, but for some reason, this time i believe you are serious... just listen to me... you can make it trough this, no matter how bad you think your life is... look at me, for example, you know what i've been trough, and you don't see me attempting every chance i get. Rosie, i am telling you NOT to do it. listen to me and understand where the hell i am coming from. i care for you. i really do. and so do a lot of other people. you may not see that right now, but just give it time. i know that you have, but just think of what you will put us through. think of me and Jacque(xemptydecemberx) and Donna(Kidpoet_213). think of all of us on YPDC. you know that i understand you, so listen to me!!!
please take care... i want to get pms from you and read your poetry again.
Deanna |
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Re: My final good bye.
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:46:00 AM AEST
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You have alwas written intense poetry, with feeling so true and very real, your thoughts a vivid and painted showing such inner passion.....and yet here you are trying to throw it all away....to just give up on all you have achieved, on people here that truely love you, your poems your mind....hell Im 34 and have known deaths door..it isnt that great, it dosent give oyu the release everyone seems to think it does....and here you are writting...thats it I had enough Im done!!!!! WHY?
Are our words to you just dust in the wind...do you actually believe that we dont care, just because alot of us live on different parts of the globe????
Hell if I could say these words to your face I would and many more...and Im not angry so drop that thought, just sad....that I may end up losing another person I that I found to show pure strength and inner beauty, so what you cut, I cut and Im ancient, yet Im still here...so whats your excuse to give up on all your friends here????or does my words just fall on deaf ears???so why give up?? you may turn your back on us, but we will never turn our backs on you...we are here always, in some ways one big family....is that so hard to accept???
Well I've had my say the rest is up too you!!!
In the end you have to decide what is best for you...
Take care always no matter what, and peace watch over your soul eternal.
Karl |
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Re: My final good bye.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:01:56 AM AEST
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i care about you rosie, this makes me so sad to hear you want to give up, this may seem odd but being everyone else has told you how much we all love and care about you, i want to share something w/ you, a lot of us writers are unstable, either once in a while or all the time, but i wouldnt give up any madness i hold inside me for then life would be boring to me, i do not want to be *normal* like most of the world, i dont know if this is coming out right, but what i mean is, the gifted and talented such as yourself and so many here are blessed; truely we are, and we are the ones who speak for those who cannot find the words, the world needs your voice hun, please stay, big hugs n' lotsa love nessa x
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Re: My final good bye.
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by pixie on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:06:33 PM AEST
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Rosie, this makes me feel very sad to read as you are a fighter it is plain to see in your poems, it relaly is, i am so sorry that you are having a rough time of it at the moment,but you are not alone,there are so many people on here that care about you and would miss you greatly, please dont be impulsive *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: My final good bye.
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 03:47:00 PM AEST
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You have a life to live,
don't believe the garbage in this world.
You deserve a better life, and Death
may not be able to give that to you.
Look deep within yourself and find
your strength.
With dignity and promise
try to give your soul what this world
sometimes tries to take away.
For your own sake,
try to save yourself.
Take care of yourself, Rosie.
--Mothy |
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Re: My final good bye.
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by blackholesun on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:07:13 PM AEST
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| oh rosie i hope you didnt kill yourself!im your friend let me know if you are ok i miss you |
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