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Array ( [sid] => 71306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Way To Go Out [time] => 2004-11-13 01:56:39 [hometext] => this isnt about me. its summin my friend needed me to write for him. [bodytext] => This life is so pointless
It needs to end
Needs to go back where it came from
That gun looks like a good decision
Looks like a quick way to go out
A quick way to leave
But that knife looks like a way to inflict pain
A way to suffer first
That loose looks good
It looks like the best way to end it all
It has just the right amount of pain
The right amount of suffering
This life is so pointless I just need to end it all
Sum would say I’m crazy but I’m not
I jus don’t wanna be here
Just wanna die
Just wanna go to that place
That place where all who I have lost are
All that I have loved will be
All that I have held dear
All the people that I want to be with
Life just looks so grim
That nine is looking pretty good right now
Should I pick it up?
Should I end it all?
Just one slip of my finger will end my life
I think I will see how tomorrow goes
Then I will make my decision
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 36 [informant] => etrojan08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
A Way To Go Out

Contributed by etrojan08 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:56:39 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



This life is so pointless
It needs to end
Needs to go back where it came from
That gun looks like a good decision
Looks like a quick way to go out
A quick way to leave
But that knife looks like a way to inflict pain
A way to suffer first
That loose looks good
It looks like the best way to end it all
It has just the right amount of pain
The right amount of suffering
This life is so pointless I just need to end it all
Sum would say I’m crazy but I’m not
I jus don’t wanna be here
Just wanna die
Just wanna go to that place
That place where all who I have lost are
All that I have loved will be
All that I have held dear
All the people that I want to be with
Life just looks so grim
That nine is looking pretty good right now
Should I pick it up?
Should I end it all?
Just one slip of my finger will end my life
I think I will see how tomorrow goes
Then I will make my decision




Copyright © etrojan08 ... [ 2004-11-13 01:56:39]
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Re: A Way To Go Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 02:55:26 AM AEST
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hopefully the decision made was not to end his/her life... if he/she was actually considering ending their life... but this is a great poem... and i really liked it... great write...

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Re: A Way To Go Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 02:56:25 AM AEST
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sorry after I posted my comment I noticed it said him on your comment to everyone... so you can forget all my him/her things...

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