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Array ( [sid] => 71294 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Insignificant [time] => 2004-11-12 23:20:59 [hometext] => The one I love keeps tormenting me, which makes me wonder...did he ever really love me? [bodytext] => I've never felt as small
As the way you made me feel
How can you hurt the one you love?
Were your feelings for me ever real?
You played on my emotions
Making me fall inlove with you
How could you do this?
After everything we've been through
I look into your beautiful eyes
I don't see the man I once knew
You have changed completely
From the man that was once you.
The man I fell inlove with
Is becoming harder and harder to find
The more I go on searching
I see I'm walking through this relationship blind
I no longer see you up ahead
You're no longer by my side
Every time I look for you
You quickly run and hide
You have become so secretive
You can no longer look me in the eye
Soon you will awake to realise
That life has just passed you by. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Tamara [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Insignificant

Contributed by Tamara on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:20:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I've never felt as small
As the way you made me feel
How can you hurt the one you love?
Were your feelings for me ever real?
You played on my emotions
Making me fall inlove with you
How could you do this?
After everything we've been through
I look into your beautiful eyes
I don't see the man I once knew
You have changed completely
From the man that was once you.
The man I fell inlove with
Is becoming harder and harder to find
The more I go on searching
I see I'm walking through this relationship blind
I no longer see you up ahead
You're no longer by my side
Every time I look for you
You quickly run and hide
You have become so secretive
You can no longer look me in the eye
Soon you will awake to realise
That life has just passed you by.




Copyright © Tamara ... [ 2004-11-12 23:20:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Insignificant (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:34:30 PM AEST
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(((((HUGS))))) I'm sorry that things have been so difficult for you lately... I hope things will be better in the future... Wish you all the best in your love life and may God bless you


Re: Insignificant (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:43:40 PM AEST
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excellent write. you have the power to leave the door open for people or shut it in their faces.


Re: Insignificant (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:08:47 AM AEST
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thats really happened with me and ur tallent had bring it with words excellent write indeed
with love naveen


Re: Insignificant (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:36:31 AM AEST
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awesome


Re: Insignificant (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 04:55:13 AM AEST
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Excellent!!! As A woman that is getting over being rejected, I can identify totally!!! You are wonderful with words!!! Great Write!! Keep writing and Keep posting!!!


Re: Insignificant (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 06:05:42 AM AEST
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A BRILLIANT WRITE TAMARA
all the best for YOUR future....
cheers!~


Re: Insignificant (User Rating: 1 )
by Dany on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:06:03 AM AEST
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I can relate sort of... I loved it. You really truly let your emotions show. Great job, keep writing.
Loved it.


Re: Insignificant (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:08:02 PM AEST
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wow that was so well expressed, very sad,

pixie xx




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