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Array ( [sid] => 71285 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Mom, I Hate You-A Letter from your Failure [time] => 2004-11-12 22:43:17 [hometext] => This is something I wrote about my mom tonight. It's not wonderful, but a friend told me to help realease my feelings by writing a letter to someone and not sending. Thus, this poem is in the form of a letter to my mother. [bodytext] => Dear Mom,
I hate you. You resent me for no reason. You are the cause of our screwed up family. I hate the way you yell and scream and shout. You're always asking me, "What the hell is wrong with you?"
What's wrong with me is you. I'm sick of the cussing and the hitting. Dying while lying. I smile like the rest of the world hoping they can't see the damage that's been done to me. Why can't I just be one of them?
I remember when I was little, your guady diamond wedding ring and the way it used to cut me when you swung and missed. I like the way you think you have power over me, the way you think you can crush all my dreams with one hand into dust.
Well, I won't give up. Despite what you say, I'm gonna be something, anyway.
From,
Your Failure [comments] => 7 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Katie2008 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Dear Mom, I Hate You-A Letter from your Failure

Contributed by Katie2008 on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Dear Mom,
I hate you. You resent me for no reason. You are the cause of our screwed up family. I hate the way you yell and scream and shout. You're always asking me, "What the hell is wrong with you?"
What's wrong with me is you. I'm sick of the cussing and the hitting. Dying while lying. I smile like the rest of the world hoping they can't see the damage that's been done to me. Why can't I just be one of them?
I remember when I was little, your guady diamond wedding ring and the way it used to cut me when you swung and missed. I like the way you think you have power over me, the way you think you can crush all my dreams with one hand into dust.
Well, I won't give up. Despite what you say, I'm gonna be something, anyway.
From,
Your Failure




Copyright © Katie2008 ... [ 2004-11-12 22:43:17]
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Re: Dear Mom, I Hate You-A Letter from your Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Unheard_Mute on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:47:59 PM AEST
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Brilliant my friend, brilliant...


Re: Dear Mom, I Hate You-A Letter from your Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:49:55 PM AEST
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awesome... powerful, dont give up!


Re: Dear Mom, I Hate You-A Letter from your Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:13:53 PM AEST
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i hope you have released your feelings. at least you have an example in life of what not to be and prove to her that you arent a failure eventually.


Re: Dear Mom, I Hate You-A Letter from your Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:57:41 PM AEST
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I feel the same way about my mom, dont give up on your life and your dreams cause of her crap. You are so much better than that.


Re: Dear Mom, I Hate You-A Letter from your Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:30:45 PM AEST
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omfg... i love u SO much and if u, bee, kayla, colleen, haleah, katelynn, or rachael were ever to leave me i would die even more inside and then i would have to kill myself b/c im a dependent little creature that im sure would all like to get rid of, and i would have to join u...
~*SMOOCHES!* Sara


Re: Dear Mom, I Hate You-A Letter from your Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:41:59 PM AEST
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great job...I actually wrote a kind of letter/poem like this but about my father...this is great work


Re: Dear Mom, I Hate You-A Letter from your Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:58:05 PM AEST
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Delicious!




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