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I cannot begin to describe.
I only know this feeling
is trapped deep inside.
My world is so cold and dark
light I cannot see.
A saddened person
I'll always be.

I cry salty tears
no one sees.
This prison I'm in
Will never set me free.

Curled up in a ball
I slowly die.
Never really knowing
the real reason why.

A helpless child
I have become.
Waitng for entry in
my Fathers black kingdom. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 32 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

The Sad Poem

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:13:06 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The sadness that I feel
I cannot begin to describe.
I only know this feeling
is trapped deep inside.
My world is so cold and dark
light I cannot see.
A saddened person
I'll always be.

I cry salty tears
no one sees.
This prison I'm in
Will never set me free.

Curled up in a ball
I slowly die.
Never really knowing
the real reason why.

A helpless child
I have become.
Waitng for entry in
my Fathers black kingdom.

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2004-11-12 20:13:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Sad Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Gir_3 on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:41:33 PM AEST
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Nice poem, I understand your hurt...but there Iam sure you can look on the bright side of the shadow! If not, dont do anything your gonna regret. I love this one tho, it has meaning!

Re: The Sad Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by cocacola1331 on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:57:08 PM AEST
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That indeed is a sad poem, but very beautifully written. I understand what you're going through (although I don't exactly know WHAt you're going through, I know how it feels to be hurt), as I am going through a very rough time right now. I'm glad that you've gotten through everything, and I really hope you keep on writing! You've got talent, this poem flows without seeming to be 'overdone'.... nice one.

Re: The Sad Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:26:17 PM AEST
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Very emotional poem
It's how I feel now
Thanks for sharing this great poem

Re: The Sad Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:34:12 PM AEST
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beautiful.. touching

Re: The Sad Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:55:10 PM AEST
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excellent write.

Re: The Sad Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:12:50 PM AEST
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wow that was emotional and sad, moving poem,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: The Sad Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:06:18 PM AEST
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very deep and well expressed poem...keep posting

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