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searching?
searching for what?
looking for what?
trying to please who?
trying to be what?
am i freaked out
am i going out of my senses
am i not in any way connected
am i on the narrow road with lot's of bending
am i sealed with the seal of hopelessness
am i counted as one with no vision, dreams or aspiration
in a world of plenty am i left wanting
holding on to emptiness
bounded by the horrows of failure
falling out of tune from the messages of life
confused by love, lust and freedom
the wounds of a heart desire unmet
yet i search day and night in time and in thought
for peace, joy, freedom, light, love- happiness and truth
but found war, sorrow, captivity-darkness and disappointments
again i found sad countenance and betrayal.
yet i am still searching
forgetting thast all is vanity
in this cruel and unfaithful world
yet i search
searching for what?
remains a big mystery............
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SEARCHING

Contributed by buccaneer on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:28:51 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



I dont understand what is wrong
searching?
searching for what?
looking for what?
trying to please who?
trying to be what?
am i freaked out
am i going out of my senses
am i not in any way connected
am i on the narrow road with lot's of bending
am i sealed with the seal of hopelessness
am i counted as one with no vision, dreams or aspiration
in a world of plenty am i left wanting
holding on to emptiness
bounded by the horrows of failure
falling out of tune from the messages of life
confused by love, lust and freedom
the wounds of a heart desire unmet
yet i search day and night in time and in thought
for peace, joy, freedom, light, love- happiness and truth
but found war, sorrow, captivity-darkness and disappointments
again i found sad countenance and betrayal.
yet i am still searching
forgetting thast all is vanity
in this cruel and unfaithful world
yet i search
searching for what?
remains a big mystery............




Copyright © buccaneer ... [ 2004-11-12 17:28:51]
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Re: SEARCHING (User Rating: 1 )
by Jere on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:43:32 PM AEST
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i like the metaphores, good write.


Re: SEARCHING (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:20:16 PM AEST
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Great Write!!! I could tell that it just started to
come out in a real emotional rush!!! You can tell those are true feelings that you feel! Keep
writing always! Keep Posting!!


Re: SEARCHING (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:20:19 PM AEST
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Great Write!!! I could tell that it just started to
come out in a real emotional rush!!! You can tell those are true feelings that you feel! Keep
writing always! Keep Posting!!


Re: SEARCHING (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:39:00 PM AEST
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awesome, i love it!


Re: SEARCHING (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:58:47 PM AEST
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Nice write
I could feel your pain and emotions
good going




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