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Array ( [sid] => 71235 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why did I do it? [time] => 2004-11-12 16:11:26 [hometext] => isnt exactly wot i wod class as poetry, but i wrote it afta i pushed my concerned boyfriend away.He was worried coz summit has been up all day &i couldnt tell him without nearly cryin which i werent gonna do whilst we were in college. comments appreciated [bodytext] =>
HURTING so much inside...
I want to cry and just be loved...
Hate myself so much no one understands...
Feel like I push you away...
I want to let you in...
But I don't know how...
You treat me so well...
I am not used to this treatment...
I cry my tears of happiness and sadness...
I am so happy around you...
Yet I want to die because I feel this is too good to be true...
I've already let you closer than most...
I feel this could be dangerous...
I'm not sure you can cope with me...
Yet still I am willing to let you try...
I hate saying good bye to you...
I can't believe I wouldn't let you know my problems...
Considering you're about the only person I could tell my problems to...
My tears make me feel weak...
This is my only form of expression...
I can't find the words to speak without tears...



SJ




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Why did I do it?

Contributed by little_genna on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:11:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry




HURTING so much inside...
I want to cry and just be loved...
Hate myself so much no one understands...
Feel like I push you away...
I want to let you in...
But I don't know how...
You treat me so well...
I am not used to this treatment...
I cry my tears of happiness and sadness...
I am so happy around you...
Yet I want to die because I feel this is too good to be true...
I've already let you closer than most...
I feel this could be dangerous...
I'm not sure you can cope with me...
Yet still I am willing to let you try...
I hate saying good bye to you...
I can't believe I wouldn't let you know my problems...
Considering you're about the only person I could tell my problems to...
My tears make me feel weak...
This is my only form of expression...
I can't find the words to speak without tears...



SJ








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Re: Why did I do it? (User Rating: 1 )
by buccaneer on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:27:06 PM AEST
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this is painfully beautyful which you can make it up some how.


Re: Why did I do it? (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:06:02 PM AEST
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awesome


Re: Why did I do it? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:17:51 PM AEST
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so very sad, a moving piece of writing,

pixie xx




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