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It’s My Turn!
Contributed by
Corona
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:31:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Today I take a stand see this gun in my hand.
You criticize the way I dress, my bullet will be your last caress.
Sick and tired of being pushed around I am going to slam your head to the ground.
I want to kick you in your face look at you now what a disgrace.
In your crowd I couldn’t blend wouldn’t even let me be your friend.
In my face you spit and welcomed me with your hit.
I blew your brains out didn’t give you time to shout.
No longer a big man as I throw you in my van.
Today I blew a fuse no longer taking your abuse.
I want you dead you deserve what you get.
Maybe next time you won’t be such slime
Oh my bad it’s too late you already had a date…with death!
Copyright ©
Corona
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2004-11-12 10:31:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: It’s My Turn!
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:33:40 AM AEST (User
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a different write, well written, great poem,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: It’s My Turn!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Flipped_out on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:44:04 AM AEST (User
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Wow..do you like to look at dead people?
I think it should be law to be able to shoot people for walking to slow
Great poem ty
Kell x |
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Re: It’s My Turn!
(User Rating: 1 ) by shena_bean on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:04:03 AM AEST (User
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this is an awesome poem |
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Re: It’s My Turn!
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:15:13 AM AEST (User
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Good write here |
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Re: It’s My Turn!
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:32:16 AM AEST (User
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Hmmmm...... so much tomement, yet hurt with a loved one.Sad.......deep and heart felt write. |
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