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Array ( [sid] => 71180 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Memories.... [time] => 2004-11-12 02:14:08 [hometext] => my memories u never forget..................i want to know by your comments is it going well............ [bodytext] => emotions extracting from my face,
as some one had made me an interesting case,
nothing but the memories yet i can shake,
remembering the way i make and the way she take..............
the love is to the way to get exhaust,
but the memories are still over those.............
not telling how it cause,
open the windows of your empty room,
look in to deep and explore ur own............
a faded facelooking for justice u will find,
and his miserable history yet to define.................................

a way to keep in close touch,
a way to reach the deeps of hearts,
these are the clippings of the time passed before and now they re-run........
nothing but these are called the Memories of the short or long love.........
like the words they will never die,
they will move with our next step............................................................
( with love naveen ) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 500 [topic] => 48 [informant] => veenu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Memories....

Contributed by veenu on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:14:08 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

emotions extracting from my face,
as some one had made me an interesting case,
nothing but the memories yet i can shake,
remembering the way i make and the way she take..............
the love is to the way to get exhaust,
but the memories are still over those.............
not telling how it cause,
open the windows of your empty room,
look in to deep and explore ur own............
a faded facelooking for justice u will find,
and his miserable history yet to define.................................

a way to keep in close touch,
a way to reach the deeps of hearts,
these are the clippings of the time passed before and now they re-run........
nothing but these are called the Memories of the short or long love.........
like the words they will never die,
they will move with our next step............................................................
( with love naveen )

Copyright © veenu ... [ 2004-11-12 02:14:08]
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Re: Memories.... (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:23:17 AM AEST
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guy I suppose this is your lost love. already I had given comments on 2 poems of this kind last week.
To love is to find
Two equal minds
That remain ever bind

girish

Re: Memories.... (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:19:58 AM AEST
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It's interesting..I don't really care for this style. I can't get into the rythem..I find it lacking in cadence .. but I myself may be the problem, I don't know.. Perhaps it's all the dots and the way the lines are arranged that throws me off..

Re: Memories.... (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 03:25:52 AM AEST
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Love is or should be one continuous flow of emotions that reach deep into the heart. I would try rewriting this with just a little more
flowing of the words. Bernard.

Re: Memories.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:25:50 AM AEST
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Your write had me going.. recalling many of my pasts history. I caught my face feeling my deepest part of my heart...

Reading your type of literature, can sure help hearts out here to clean and re-organize our heart closet..

Memories are good in many ways.. the good along with the good.. they help us to recall the examples of experiences that either went well.. or not.. they are still a part of who we are... and how we step into the next levels of our lives..

Your writes hypnotize my eyes.. that look deeper into my soul, and I feel the spirit of your pen as it was placed down to create a masterpiece of words, not easy to express.. yet, enough here to grasp for a good long time to come..

Thank you ,

A reader friend,,

Raquel Leah Poetess ; ))

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