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decomposed teddy bears

Contributed by biggnigg on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



so many tears are shed that cheeks become puddles, turned to oceans when gathered by so many others
teddy bears drenched from your tears in your cuddles, you too rained on; no shelter for you to take cover
no shelter can be found, you dig a dirt mound, a fox hole but the rain freezes the body, you get too cold
a couple years old, a couple tears more, look for stronger foundation, your mounds about to fold
heart beats now have to be sold, heart breaks given for free, you try to take it back with solication of your soul
you heart starts to roll, your gettin too cold, hearts gettin colder during the age of when your body gets old
you cant shed tears to a teddy bear, your shoulder to cry on gone, decomposed dead to dreams and memories
seconds seem like centuries, futures are now altered now simply dreams not close to being distant destinies
listen to me, listen to them, listen to yourself, no heart beat felt, seems like avalanches of rocks falling quick
you stop listen to it, cant comprehend it, but you still listen, cant pay full attention, when the bolders fall they miss
you wish they hit, die quick, easy painless, a seamless heart ripped at the seams by dreams that wouldnt come true
your oceans were morning dew, than lakes, you think differently, oceans wont form, lakes will empty, not true
this isnt simple wells, simple love spells, hypnotized by mind spells, you listen for 'you', nowhere is the destination
mind focused yet still wonders, mentallity focused yet still ponders, your eyes look around no complete fixation
focusing becomes so hard, so hard it is to focus on happiness, on light when darkness scares and creeps
so easy to say 'run away, focus straight' too late, you cant seem to stray when your soul and darkness meets
tears fall so quick, you try to walk but you slip, and when you wipe them away they keep coming, did i miss?
heart beats hammer like fists in the depths of nothingness, a question, regaining old tears and dreams jus a wish?




Copyright © biggnigg ... [ 2002-11-21 02:20:00]
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Re: decomposed teddy bears (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:48:17 AM AEST
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I didnt see anything wrong with this poem,i truly liked it! Christina


Re: decomposed teddy bears (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:02:21 AM AEST
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I dont think that it sucks..

Ali


Re: decomposed teddy bears (User Rating: 1 )
by Daydreamer on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 10:11:40 PM AEST
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ooo come now this didn't suck. It was a great write I liked it. It was dripping with sadness and hardships but some can really relate. `Day`




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