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My life, my world
The one I love endlessly
Before me is a vision
That has eyes which read poetry
They sparkle brightly ahead
With an offer of immortality
You are a chest of treasures
To which I have the key
You're worth more than a flawless diamond
You are my fantasy
If you gazed into my ebony eyes
They would mirror what I feel for you
Because your eyes are the window to your soul
That's why mine smile for you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Tamara [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Ebony Eyes Are Smiling

Contributed by Tamara on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:56:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I look at you and what do I see?
My life, my world
The one I love endlessly
Before me is a vision
That has eyes which read poetry
They sparkle brightly ahead
With an offer of immortality
You are a chest of treasures
To which I have the key
You're worth more than a flawless diamond
You are my fantasy
If you gazed into my ebony eyes
They would mirror what I feel for you
Because your eyes are the window to your soul
That's why mine smile for you.

Copyright © Tamara ... [ 2004-11-11 21:56:42]
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Re: Ebony Eyes Are Smiling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:02:07 PM AEST
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Such a pretty love poem! Nice write. Cheers!

Re: Ebony Eyes Are Smiling (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:50:07 PM AEST
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Tamara
Beautifuly done great feeling & emotion
I look at you and what do I see
My life my world
The one I love endlessly
Wondeful begining it says alot about you
You to must be a beautiful person
Sinned

Re: Ebony Eyes Are Smiling (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:12:17 PM AEST
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Oh I loved this little piece! Great write. Much peace.

Re: Ebony Eyes Are Smiling (User Rating: 1 )
by maggsie on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:25:14 PM AEST
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yip, enjoyed it but loose you are my fantasy line, u dont need it and it sounds creepy, come on would u like to be someones fantasy.... maybe its just me but beautiful, uplifting.
maggsie

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