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That I'm always listening, always care,
When she needs help, I have the time to spare,
I'm her therapist, her big teddy bear.
When she gets hurt, on my shoulder she cries,
My clothes get stained with the pain from her eyes,
She thinks that I'm great, that I'm smart and wise,
It's just that I can see past all of their lies.
They promise her love that will never fade,
But like all guys, they just want to get laid,
She gives her heart, and with pain she is paid,
They don't care about the hurt they have made.
So she's wondering where the one has been,
He's infront of her, holding up her chin... [comments] => 8 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Unheard_Mute [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Unreturned Love

Contributed by Unheard_Mute on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:00:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

She says I'm her best friend, I'm always there,
That I'm always listening, always care,
When she needs help, I have the time to spare,
I'm her therapist, her big teddy bear.
When she gets hurt, on my shoulder she cries,
My clothes get stained with the pain from her eyes,
She thinks that I'm great, that I'm smart and wise,
It's just that I can see past all of their lies.
They promise her love that will never fade,
But like all guys, they just want to get laid,
She gives her heart, and with pain she is paid,
They don't care about the hurt they have made.
So she's wondering where the one has been,
He's infront of her, holding up her chin...

Copyright © Unheard_Mute ... [ 2004-11-11 17:00:48]
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Re: Unreturned Love (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:10:22 PM AEST
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what beautiful words for someone, that sounds as if they are truly loved........sometimes we forget how one can seriously love.........and when it happens one freezes. Great write.

Re: Unreturned Love (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitolyn on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:11:06 PM AEST
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wow!
i really like that poem.
i think it was very deep.
& heart felt.

Re: Unreturned Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:13:55 PM AEST
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Check your spelling, but otherwise, this is very impressive.
Stitch

Re: Unreturned Love (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:26:18 PM AEST
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wow..... this one floored me.....you put me inside a shoulder i have cried upon......my clothes get stained with the pain from her eyes....this just rocks.....

Re: Unreturned Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiltzWiltz on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:51:33 PM AEST
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good evening Unheard_Mute...this poem took my breath away. its so very beautiful, and also reminds me of a time that i loved someone and had to watch them move from one person to the next without knowing my feelings. this poem is beautiful.

Re: Unreturned Love (User Rating: 1 )
by englishprincej on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 03:21:38 PM AEST
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Wow ! Great stuff !

Re: Unreturned Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:10:31 PM AEST
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well i was going to say that you are one of the first ones ive seen spell everything correctly in their poem and then you have to use maid instead of made! tsk tsk =] excellent sonnet, very good for the first one. need i say jealous again?

Re: Unreturned Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:52:43 PM AEST
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That's so beautiful...
The thought of this makes my heart ache

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