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Array ( [sid] => 71110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous [time] => 2004-11-11 16:53:26 [hometext] => You always wish you could have so much more..then when it happens you freeze and let the little things take over.Take what you have and make the best!!! [bodytext] => Thecool crisp air
The soft leaves from the trees
The wonderful thoughts
The one who has them, and with you

You walk alone, and the prince appears
To what you have, and takes all the fears
The subtle look and the shyness around
Makes one know, what they have found

You stop and wonder with all glow
Happiness, and warm feeling makes you flow
Keeps you from doubting, what you thought you may gave
To have the one to hold you and make your save

Go back to the cool crisp air that perceives
To that time and moment ...........you know what you achieved

Life takes a toll on our lives, and sometimes we take granted what is the best and it is in our eyes!

Lost love, will never be.............Just a hold for now and will be achieved.!!!! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 21 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous

Contributed by brew on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:53:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Thecool crisp air
The soft leaves from the trees
The wonderful thoughts
The one who has them, and with you

You walk alone, and the prince appears
To what you have, and takes all the fears
The subtle look and the shyness around
Makes one know, what they have found

You stop and wonder with all glow
Happiness, and warm feeling makes you flow
Keeps you from doubting, what you thought you may gave
To have the one to hold you and make your save

Go back to the cool crisp air that perceives
To that time and moment ...........you know what you achieved

Life takes a toll on our lives, and sometimes we take granted what is the best and it is in our eyes!

Lost love, will never be.............Just a hold for now and will be achieved.!!!!




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Re: Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:05:31 PM AEST
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Very nice! And thank you for posting something *positive*.


Re: Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous (User Rating: 1 )
by englishprincej on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 03:19:58 PM AEST
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Beautiful work. Nice to see you posting again. Great images you create.


Re: Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 03:13:25 AM AEST
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Good poem I like the erraticness of style here bernard.


Re: Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:33:04 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, nice images painted by your words, nice to read something written lightly but with feeling. enjoyible reading.




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