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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Weepy Willow Tree
[time] => 2004-11-11 15:55:45
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The weepy willow tree looked so cold
Its brunette stalk looked ready to fold
Its crisp sundried hair shrivelled in the rain
All the dew heaped on it’s descending mane
This is where we first kissed; underneath the bark
The clatter of four hands and two hearts forever parked
Protected by the weepy willow tree
Forever sharing all its tepid and graceful beauty
I feel so safe underneath your cherished stalks
Like a lighthouse protecting from the grasp of rocks
I wonder if you enjoy shielding the lifelight
Your damp moist bark feels unblemished like midnight
You are a mere tree, but forever imprinted in my mind
Apart of me that no one else can ever find
[comments] => 6
[counter] => 260
[topic] => 30
[informant] => Overstated
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[alanguage] => english
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[score] => 14
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => PoemsonBeauty
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Re: The Weepy Willow Tree
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:34:19 PM AEST
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| from our past she does enfold....perfectly done my friend..... |
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Re: The Weepy Willow Tree
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:05:48 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Weepy Willow Tree
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:18:42 PM AEST
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Yes indeed,truly beautiful.Forever she is imprinted in your mind,but thanks to her,forever this poem will always shine...
PumpkinPie |
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Re: The Weepy Willow Tree
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by Kie on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:56:10 AM AEST
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I am from the south and I tell you that I LOVE weeping willows. I have seen them adorning plantations or in the middle of ponds on islands.
It is like they are bending so graceful to the sky or something and I wonder how many lover's have fallen in love beneath her shade?
I LOVED this poem.
Kie |
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Re: The Weepy Willow Tree
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 07:14:13 PM AEST
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| that was beautiful. i love weeping willow trees. there so pretty. |
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Re: The Weepy Willow Tree
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:35:35 AM AEST
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This was another beautiful poem. I liked the way that you wrote about the tree. It was full of compassion and it was truly beautiful. Great poem.
christina |
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