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Never to see the light of day
Days and weeks gradually passed by
The razorblade lay untouched by I
Old wounds slowly disappeared
As too the blood that had been smeared
Profound happiness was to come
When the need to pierce the flesh succumbed
Yet deep within my impassive heart
The lust for pain had become a part
Longing to watch my veins be drained
Caused me much more immense pain
Submitting to my aching sin
I carved once more into my skin [comments] => 6 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 13 [informant] => EternalNight4x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Sumbit to Razorblade

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 03:11:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I pushed the razorblade away
Never to see the light of day
Days and weeks gradually passed by
The razorblade lay untouched by I
Old wounds slowly disappeared
As too the blood that had been smeared
Profound happiness was to come
When the need to pierce the flesh succumbed
Yet deep within my impassive heart
The lust for pain had become a part
Longing to watch my veins be drained
Caused me much more immense pain
Submitting to my aching sin
I carved once more into my skin

Copyright © EternalNight4x ... [ 2004-11-11 15:11:12]
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Re: Sumbit to Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 03:17:08 PM AEST
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nothing short of amazing. i know what its like. i'm a cronic cutter too, so this hit really close to home for me... what a really good write.
~screwup

Re: Sumbit to Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by surge_joebot on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 03:29:25 PM AEST
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amazing, simply so well written and sad, and completely understandable, I spent all of yesterday in this horrible sad way, but once i had cut myself and had blood flowed from me it was alittle bit better, so i completely relate, really well written, thanks for sharing.
cheers
demelza

Re: Sumbit to Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:09:16 PM AEST
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NOOO DONT DO IT!!!! - wow this was a brillant piece of writing - kept me entertained..

Re: Sumbit to Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:20:53 PM AEST
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hey, that was great! I've tried to stop too... yeah, didn't work for me, lol. Oh well. Good job, though. The way you used your words really brought the poem and the emotions alive.

Felix The Great

Re: Sumbit to Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:45:30 PM AEST
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wow!....this is awesome...it sounds like something i would write...i know this feeling very well i have been there and done that.....and im still giving in to the razorblade.....great job...it had special meaning to me......fantastic poem

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Sumbit to Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 06:19:12 PM AEST
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Not a good thing to carve into your skin, other than that a very good write.

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