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It's time for me to go, as I can't stay here any more!

Contributed by deathdrop on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:39:22 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I’m tired.
I don’t sleep much any more.
Pain’s been fired.
Deep within my core.

You won’t leave,
AND IT’S BREAKING ME!
And I can’t face him,
When me gets mad at me!

My arms are slit in a pool of filth.
All of this sickness is making me ill!

I’m sorry to those who feel I have worth.
But I can’t continue feeling this hurt.

I gonna fail if I continue to try.
So why not go, why not just die?

At night, I cry, my-self to sleep.
I want to die. I want to leave.

At school I laugh but scream inside.
At home when they start it makes me cry…

Things are breaking and I just can’t stay.
There’s no point in counseling or running away.

There’s no point in effort when I’m just breaking down.
I’m holding no happiness, just bleeding on the ground…




Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-11-11 11:39:22]
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Re: It's time for me to go, as I can't stay here any more! (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:41:56 AM AEST
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yes you can stay here, you have the strength to battle this, yourf poems are proof that you can do it, you are still here, fighting your troubles you are not alone hun *hugs*

pixie xx


Re: It's time for me to go, as I can't stay here any more! (User Rating: 1 )
by thepos on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:52:01 PM AEST
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your poem is a little empty. Nice but, empty. I don't think you feel that way. Denial sux doesn't it? The poem seems like a poem any teen could right to make his or her friends think he or her is deferent. Ok though.


Re: It's time for me to go, as I can't stay here any more! (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:49:53 PM AEST
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"My arms are slit in a pool of filth" - nice line brings vivid images to mind. Nice write. Tiffany J. (Red_October)




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