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Array ( [sid] => 71064 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Scared [time] => 2004-11-11 11:30:29 [hometext] => One of my best and only love poem. [bodytext] => Scared

As we held hands in the marsh, our love fluttered like wings of an angel. The trees swayed like our arms as we ran.

Still overwhelmed by the wind I couldn't stop staring at your hair. You were so beautiful as you glared at the sky.

The birds watched us both kiss under the dim, sensational stars. A paradisaical smile on your face.

You then pulled my hands, to take me away. I didn't know why but, I followed with you and my love.

You brought me to a hill, more greener grass I've ever seen. It was as though it shined just for us.

You told me you loved me and I told you, too. Every time you blinked, my love grew even stronger.

As I daydreamed about you and me together, you layed your back on the green grass.

I told you how beautiful you were than any one I've ever seen, as I lay down right beside you.

Then black came upon us, It was the hate of all life. The coldest thing I've ever seen.

I knew you were scared, as I held you in my arms, promising I would never let go.

I held you for hours, from that shadow of hate. I then saw the look on your face.

I tried my best to comfort you. Then saw that you weren't scared any more.

I grabbed your arms slowly and told you, you'll be ok.

You turned your head towards mine and we locked each others eyes. Then we kissed ever so softly.

I didn't care about anything, not even my life. I only cared about you.

That cloud of hate blazed at us with the fearful sound of evil but, still well aware that I wouldn't let go.

I couldn't let go because my heart told me I shouldn't, my love gave me all the strength that I need.

You and I on top of that hill together is all I thought about. Then I smiled.

I could have held you forever, intill the day I die. You knew that I would.

Your black jacket swayed as we sat there for hours, intill the hate went away.

I knew you were safe and you knew it, too. Then you and I smiled.

Then we got up together, both holding hands. Our love didn't care what just happened.

We had fun together for the next few days. Every day I seemed to love you more.

It was fun, carrying you past that river. The blue water splashing in the air.

It was fun running through the forest with you.

The sunlight shot through the trees, like your beauty.

I let go of your hands and sat down by a tree, you then sat right beside me resting your head on my shoulder.

Then I put my fingers through your hair, like a whale in the ocean.

The sun shined on your hair, making it even more beautiful.

But now I can't see you any more.

I now need to go. I will always love you, I will never forget you.

There is always a place in my heart. I hope I'll see you another day and I hope you think that, too.

I have a great adventure to seek but, it will end.

Never forget that you will be scarred in my heart.

I won't see you soon, it will be a while but, I will find you some day and this I won't forget.

You need to know this hurts me so much. I'v never felt this pain before.

It hurts me so, that I need to leave you but, will feel this way intill I find you.

I am scared of nothing but, one thing.And that one thing is...






...if you will love me next time I see you.

--Evan L.--

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Scared

Contributed by thepos on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:30:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Scared

As we held hands in the marsh, our love fluttered like wings of an angel. The trees swayed like our arms as we ran.

Still overwhelmed by the wind I couldn't stop staring at your hair. You were so beautiful as you glared at the sky.

The birds watched us both kiss under the dim, sensational stars. A paradisaical smile on your face.

You then pulled my hands, to take me away. I didn't know why but, I followed with you and my love.

You brought me to a hill, more greener grass I've ever seen. It was as though it shined just for us.

You told me you loved me and I told you, too. Every time you blinked, my love grew even stronger.

As I daydreamed about you and me together, you layed your back on the green grass.

I told you how beautiful you were than any one I've ever seen, as I lay down right beside you.

Then black came upon us, It was the hate of all life. The coldest thing I've ever seen.

I knew you were scared, as I held you in my arms, promising I would never let go.

I held you for hours, from that shadow of hate. I then saw the look on your face.

I tried my best to comfort you. Then saw that you weren't scared any more.

I grabbed your arms slowly and told you, you'll be ok.

You turned your head towards mine and we locked each others eyes. Then we kissed ever so softly.

I didn't care about anything, not even my life. I only cared about you.

That cloud of hate blazed at us with the fearful sound of evil but, still well aware that I wouldn't let go.

I couldn't let go because my heart told me I shouldn't, my love gave me all the strength that I need.

You and I on top of that hill together is all I thought about. Then I smiled.

I could have held you forever, intill the day I die. You knew that I would.

Your black jacket swayed as we sat there for hours, intill the hate went away.

I knew you were safe and you knew it, too. Then you and I smiled.

Then we got up together, both holding hands. Our love didn't care what just happened.

We had fun together for the next few days. Every day I seemed to love you more.

It was fun, carrying you past that river. The blue water splashing in the air.

It was fun running through the forest with you.

The sunlight shot through the trees, like your beauty.

I let go of your hands and sat down by a tree, you then sat right beside me resting your head on my shoulder.

Then I put my fingers through your hair, like a whale in the ocean.

The sun shined on your hair, making it even more beautiful.

But now I can't see you any more.

I now need to go. I will always love you, I will never forget you.

There is always a place in my heart. I hope I'll see you another day and I hope you think that, too.

I have a great adventure to seek but, it will end.

Never forget that you will be scarred in my heart.

I won't see you soon, it will be a while but, I will find you some day and this I won't forget.

You need to know this hurts me so much. I'v never felt this pain before.

It hurts me so, that I need to leave you but, will feel this way intill I find you.

I am scared of nothing but, one thing.And that one thing is...






...if you will love me next time I see you.

--Evan L.--

www.thepoemsofsorrow.com




Copyright © thepos ... [ 2004-11-11 11:30:29]
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Re: Scared (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 06:14:17 PM AEST
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I liked this one it was so well written




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