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Array ( [sid] => 70940 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life without you...(true experience) [time] => 2004-11-10 12:17:13 [hometext] => I was very young when I was with the man I love.We kept it a secret from everyone.I thought I'd be with him forever,but it turns out when I told my mom,he left. He was only in it for my body. Happily, he never got it. But still I love. [bodytext] => LIFE WITHOUT YOU

Killing me,
raping me,
watching me,
haunting me.

This is what you do,
I fear my life,
and do not live,
for I always think of you!

Get out! Get out!
Stop taunting me,
my mind so clouded,
I can not see.

Your face is magic,
I love you so,
your voice so soft,
you let me go.

I spoke the truth,
and got you mad,
now my life is all but glad,

Come back sweet love,
caress me once more,
for I won’t survive,
since my life is now torn.

Killing the light,
in which we once lived,
Surrender my fight,
My life I now give.

I wish I was right,
and you would come back,
but I know it’s not true,
cause compassion you lack.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 48 [informant] => givingin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Life without you...(true experience)

Contributed by givingin on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:17:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



LIFE WITHOUT YOU

Killing me,
raping me,
watching me,
haunting me.

This is what you do,
I fear my life,
and do not live,
for I always think of you!

Get out! Get out!
Stop taunting me,
my mind so clouded,
I can not see.

Your face is magic,
I love you so,
your voice so soft,
you let me go.

I spoke the truth,
and got you mad,
now my life is all but glad,

Come back sweet love,
caress me once more,
for I won’t survive,
since my life is now torn.

Killing the light,
in which we once lived,
Surrender my fight,
My life I now give.

I wish I was right,
and you would come back,
but I know it’s not true,
cause compassion you lack.




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Re: Life without you...(true experience) (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:18:53 PM AEST
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very sad, sorry you had to go through this, it must have really hurt,

takecare,
pixie xx


Re: Life without you...(true experience) (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:52:26 PM AEST
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Your poem is very strong, a great way to take care of your emotional spirit. Nice write. Tiffany J. (Red_October)


Re: Life without you...(true experience) (User Rating: 1 )
by Novocane on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 05:24:59 PM AEST
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pretty good, too bad a lot of girls have to go thru a relationship with some a-hole who only wants their body at that age :-/

happens to my friends all the time :(

otherwise, good poem :)


Re: Life without you...(true experience) (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:39:44 PM AEST
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Tremendus poem great write.I felt your pain,but know you gained.

Sinned




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