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Don’t really fit in any kind of place,
Feel abnormal, more than a little bit strange,
Wish that there was a way I could rearrange.

Pain has ravaged my face & my heart,
I don’t know where I end & hurt starts,
We have morphed into one messed up being,
From me all my love is fleeing.

When people look they see a blank expression,
One that’s been created by the devils obsession,
My beautiful hair is falling out in clumps,
Out of me the demons are tearing lumps.

My once sparkling blue eyes now hollow,
Only down the dark paths do I follow,
There’s nothing left for me here,
In the still I can hear death creeping near.

My rosy lips no longer speak kind words,
Everything but evil goes unheard,
I am the girl without a face,
In me any good there’s not a trace.

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The Girl Without A Face

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:16:03 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I am the girl without a face,
Don’t really fit in any kind of place,
Feel abnormal, more than a little bit strange,
Wish that there was a way I could rearrange.

Pain has ravaged my face & my heart,
I don’t know where I end & hurt starts,
We have morphed into one messed up being,
From me all my love is fleeing.

When people look they see a blank expression,
One that’s been created by the devils obsession,
My beautiful hair is falling out in clumps,
Out of me the demons are tearing lumps.

My once sparkling blue eyes now hollow,
Only down the dark paths do I follow,
There’s nothing left for me here,
In the still I can hear death creeping near.

My rosy lips no longer speak kind words,
Everything but evil goes unheard,
I am the girl without a face,
In me any good there’s not a trace.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-11-10 12:16:03]
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Re: The Girl Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:46:18 PM AEST
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very good, sad read... I can relate.....

* tear *

*~givingin~*

Re: The Girl Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:54:27 PM AEST
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Oh, sweety, this is a very good write, very sad.
*hugs*
~_Raspberry_

Re: The Girl Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:59:38 PM AEST
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loved it, felt it thoroughly. great write. Tiffany J. (Red_October)

Re: The Girl Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:42:53 PM AEST
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a good write..hope it's not true. I see and read a lot of goodness in my little pix. :-*)

Re: The Girl Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 05:43:04 PM AEST
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Really really good poem....love it....sad....but obviously great

Re: The Girl Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:00:42 PM AEST
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everything but evil goes unheard...yes it does...your work is so powerful and well written....you touch a forgotten area of the soul.....

Re: The Girl Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by pander on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:35:04 PM AEST
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In me any good there's not a trace.

I can't believe the above is true of you. I know there is a huge amounnt of good inside of you. I know this because I have been lucky enough to be on the receiving end of your kindness many times Pixie.

*Big hugs to my dearest friend*

Lots of love,
Pander
xxxx

Re: The Girl Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:33:35 AM AEST
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If you can write something like this than there is good inside of you and a conscience.

We all lose our way but, you have to blaze on.

It is soooooooooooooooo much more fun to work towards being happy than to constantly be unhappy.

Just my cent for the day...

Kie (Who thinks your face is lovely)

Re: The Girl Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:24:58 AM AEST
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Auh so sad....but what an excellent piece. Dark stuff. I hope u see better days ahead. Feelings of the inner being very well portrayed & poetically put together in almost song like fashion. Very gripping.

Corinna

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