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Array ( [sid] => 70863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~UnPerfect~ [time] => 2004-11-09 21:05:58 [hometext] => for my boyfriend.....if only he could see that I share his pain [bodytext] => He hides so many secrets......
Deep within his eyes
I try to get them out
But he lives in nothing but lies.
A smile is what he wears
Along with tears of joy
A frown is under the twinkle
Of his fear which makes him a boy.
I too bare many secrets
Longing from within
But we both just laugh and smile
And let this life of Satan wear us thin.
In his dreams of pink elephants
Purple fairies and talking seas
I know that his pain is still lurking
The demons?...no....
He never talks of these.
He lives in a land of make belive
Where everything is allright
But the rancid stench of his suicide thoughts
Keep him alive at night.
I wish that he could see
That I can help him through his pain
But yet..... how can I help someone
When MY demons keep reoccuring
Time and Time again?
Human Waste is what we are
Or at least, seem to be
I want to love this man
And have him love me.
The anger of so many years
Hides within our eyes
The eyes that cry so many tears
Which make us live in a disguise. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Alina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
~UnPerfect~

Contributed by Alina on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:05:58 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



He hides so many secrets......
Deep within his eyes
I try to get them out
But he lives in nothing but lies.
A smile is what he wears
Along with tears of joy
A frown is under the twinkle
Of his fear which makes him a boy.
I too bare many secrets
Longing from within
But we both just laugh and smile
And let this life of Satan wear us thin.
In his dreams of pink elephants
Purple fairies and talking seas
I know that his pain is still lurking
The demons?...no....
He never talks of these.
He lives in a land of make belive
Where everything is allright
But the rancid stench of his suicide thoughts
Keep him alive at night.
I wish that he could see
That I can help him through his pain
But yet..... how can I help someone
When MY demons keep reoccuring
Time and Time again?
Human Waste is what we are
Or at least, seem to be
I want to love this man
And have him love me.
The anger of so many years
Hides within our eyes
The eyes that cry so many tears
Which make us live in a disguise.




Copyright © Alina ... [ 2004-11-09 21:05:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: ~UnPerfect~ (User Rating: 1 )
by BrookeStar on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:15:04 PM AEST
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Wow this touched me. I have been in a living something or rather right now. But nobody knows how I feel I keep it all in side hide it with a big smile so no one else knows anything about me they always think I am happy because I laugh all the time like I am enjoying life but actuly I am burning up with no water near by to but out the flames.


Re: ~UnPerfect~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:58:42 PM AEST
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wow...this is really good. it's great to see you're sticking by your boyfriend through the hard times.




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