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Array ( [sid] => 70819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => *My Prayer* [time] => 2004-11-09 16:06:07 [hometext] => this isn't one of my best but its pretty good...PLEASE READ...comments apreciated [bodytext] => Dear Lord,

Tell me are you listening?
Are you watching as i pray
I've come to ask forgiveness
For all the wrongs I've commited today

I forgot who I love deeply
And treated them like dirt
I hope they can forgive me
Although i know I've caused them hurt

I understand that I have messed up
So help me Lord my God
To follow in Your footsteps
And stop acting like a fraud

I want to change my ways
And end this life of sin
So tell me how to be like You
Tell me where to begin

Please hear my request
And forgive me for my wrongs
All I want to do is please You
And end up where I belong

may your will be done*Amen

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*My Prayer*

Contributed by allymp on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:06:07 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Dear Lord,

Tell me are you listening?
Are you watching as i pray
I've come to ask forgiveness
For all the wrongs I've commited today

I forgot who I love deeply
And treated them like dirt
I hope they can forgive me
Although i know I've caused them hurt

I understand that I have messed up
So help me Lord my God
To follow in Your footsteps
And stop acting like a fraud

I want to change my ways
And end this life of sin
So tell me how to be like You
Tell me where to begin

Please hear my request
And forgive me for my wrongs
All I want to do is please You
And end up where I belong

may your will be done*Amen

Copyright © allymp ... [ 2004-11-09 16:06:07]
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Re: *My Prayer* (User Rating: 1 )
by romayne on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:51:33 PM AEST
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Good write of a message from your heart. Romayne

Re: *My Prayer* (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:11:03 PM AEST
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This is a prayer I should have prayed many times in my life and probably at times will stil need too. It is beautiful work. Thank you for sharing.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: *My Prayer* (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:59:28 PM AEST
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Excellent write! So beautiful.

Re: *My Prayer* (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:45:43 AM AEST
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Not one of your best ?
Your prayer was beautifully said.
You have talent grl.
Sinned

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