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Array ( [sid] => 70816 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Misery: A Couple Words [time] => 2004-11-09 15:41:27 [hometext] => Another one of The Misery series poem. [bodytext] => The Misery: A Couple Words

I sit here today,

Thinking about my past.

On all the things I hate,

And how long my life will last.

Why do you people hate me?

Why must you be so mean?

Is this how you should treat me?

If not, that's what it seems.

I will not justify my feelings,

But I know I can.

You people keep provoking me,

This is why I ran.

You people disrespect me,

But you still don't realize.

What you say about me,

Stays in my inside.

I don't forget your face,

Or even your evil voice.

I could be mean when I see you,

But I don't choose that choice.

I still try to be nice to you,

But look at what you've done.

No longer will I be nice,

No longer will you have fun.

I hold this pills in my hand,

Thinking of all the things you've said.

Through all those moments you laughed at me,

My emotions bled.

I've suffered way to long,

Today it is the end.

you have no more chances to say sorroy,

I will never be your friend.

I've taken all the pills,

I've taken away my life.

Why did you be so mean?

Now I'll never have a wife.

Your heart is filled hatred,

I have no more than an hour.

For my heart to loose control,

and my mind to loose my power.

I will no longer hear your evil voice,

Can't you see what you have done!?

You made me turn insaine!

My poisoned heart turns afraid,

Some how I"m afraid to die.

But this can't be the answer,

No matter hard I try.

Good-bye to all you people,

who has cuased me only but strife.

All because a couple of words,

Has ended another life.

--Evan L.--
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The Misery: A Couple Words

Contributed by thepos on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:41:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The Misery: A Couple Words

I sit here today,

Thinking about my past.

On all the things I hate,

And how long my life will last.

Why do you people hate me?

Why must you be so mean?

Is this how you should treat me?

If not, that's what it seems.

I will not justify my feelings,

But I know I can.

You people keep provoking me,

This is why I ran.

You people disrespect me,

But you still don't realize.

What you say about me,

Stays in my inside.

I don't forget your face,

Or even your evil voice.

I could be mean when I see you,

But I don't choose that choice.

I still try to be nice to you,

But look at what you've done.

No longer will I be nice,

No longer will you have fun.

I hold this pills in my hand,

Thinking of all the things you've said.

Through all those moments you laughed at me,

My emotions bled.

I've suffered way to long,

Today it is the end.

you have no more chances to say sorroy,

I will never be your friend.

I've taken all the pills,

I've taken away my life.

Why did you be so mean?

Now I'll never have a wife.

Your heart is filled hatred,

I have no more than an hour.

For my heart to loose control,

and my mind to loose my power.

I will no longer hear your evil voice,

Can't you see what you have done!?

You made me turn insaine!

My poisoned heart turns afraid,

Some how I"m afraid to die.

But this can't be the answer,

No matter hard I try.

Good-bye to all you people,

who has cuased me only but strife.

All because a couple of words,

Has ended another life.

--Evan L.--

Copyright © thepos ... [ 2004-11-09 15:41:27]
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Re: The Misery: A Couple Words (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:48:18 PM AEST
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"NICELY WRITEN" Your emotions run deep through out this write. GOOD JOB thepos

~~DENNIS~~

Re: The Misery: A Couple Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:46:40 AM AEST
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i've just read an amazing poem before this about someone greiving after some one has committed suicide. i said it was the best id ever read...an know i take it back...Jen

Re: The Misery: A Couple Words (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:21:12 PM AEST
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I can relate to these feelings. It is like no matter how nice you are they wont stop hurting you. You look like it doesn't bother you on the outside but inside it feels like a stake going through you. How can people be so heartless? It is horrible how the world is turning...Everything is stained by the black hate that we create. It often seems that death is the right way. I feel that more times than not. Just know you aren't alone. If you ever need to talk, I will be here...I will understand.

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