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Array ( [sid] => 70813 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Misery: Good Bye [time] => 2004-11-09 15:38:40 [hometext] => The Misery is my next series. I wrote each one to tell people not how just I feel but, how others can feel this way, too. More on: http://www.thepoemsofsorrow.com [bodytext] => I've hated my life,

Since the day I was born.

My emotions are ruined,

My love has been torn.

So I stand here today,

Thinking about all I've done.

About the good things in my life,

Oh wait, that's none.

I hold this blade in my hand,

And blood on my wrist.

I can't take this any more,

I couldn't resist.

It's to late to feel love,

It's to late to turn back.

Why did I do this?

Has my life turned black?

I then start to cry,

Then drop the knife.

I can be successful,

And live a happy life.

I don't want to die,

I no longer feel pain.

But blood keeps on falling,

It pours like the rain.

I rush to the freezer,

Top grab something cold.

But it's to late,

My life I no longer hold.

Why did I do this?

Why can't I cry?

"Please help me some one!"

Then I fall down and die.

--Evan L.--

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The Misery: Good Bye

Contributed by thepos on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:38:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I've hated my life,

Since the day I was born.

My emotions are ruined,

My love has been torn.

So I stand here today,

Thinking about all I've done.

About the good things in my life,

Oh wait, that's none.

I hold this blade in my hand,

And blood on my wrist.

I can't take this any more,

I couldn't resist.

It's to late to feel love,

It's to late to turn back.

Why did I do this?

Has my life turned black?

I then start to cry,

Then drop the knife.

I can be successful,

And live a happy life.

I don't want to die,

I no longer feel pain.

But blood keeps on falling,

It pours like the rain.

I rush to the freezer,

Top grab something cold.

But it's to late,

My life I no longer hold.

Why did I do this?

Why can't I cry?

"Please help me some one!"

Then I fall down and die.

--Evan L.--

Copyright © thepos ... [ 2004-11-09 15:38:40]
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Re: The Misery: Good Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:54:17 PM AEST
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Another Good write. So much sadness so much pain. Keep on writing it helps others to know others to see others to share. and comments let you know you are not alone with these thoughts of dispare. thepos

~~DENNIS~~

Re: The Misery: Good Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by purity on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:31:16 PM AEST
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I hope this makes others re-think the crucial decision .Far too many regrets for such an irreversible mistake. As long as u live u have a choice , a chance and another oppurtunity to choose .

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