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Thoughts Of Suicide
Contributed by
screwup
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:15:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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is this my last goodbye
you better hope not
cause you can't even
look me in the eye
my fate gets closer
to being set in stone
as I cut closer,
closer to the bone
everyday I bathe myself in despair
cause I can't see through all of these tears
my life is a living hell
thinking of eveytime I fell
pushed deeper and deeper inside myself
trapped in my head
blood all around my bed
I want to die
I'm going gonna commit suicide
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screwup
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2004-11-09 15:15:33]
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Re: Thoughts Of Suicide
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:24:59 PM AEST
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This reminds me of my youth and how I wanted to die. I no longer have thoughts of it But I still have cuts from it. I've read a couple of your other works. They are very good you seem to write from your soul and heart. Keep on writing and sharing your thoughts. It helps, Well it helped me. Thanks for sharing. "GOOD POEM" *screwup*
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Thoughts Of Suicide
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by happybunnyfan on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:47:07 AM AEST
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love it. i remember when i had those thoughts, the last was...today, a few minutes ago. i've killing myself twice. but it didn't work. as you can see.lol
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Re: Thoughts Of Suicide
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:53:19 PM AEST
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hey nice write. hope u dont do what the poem says.
read some of mine and tell me what u think ok g2g bye
DEMON |
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Re: Thoughts Of Suicide
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:33:18 AM AEST
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you know there is one thing true of this poem...one stanza...you can't even
look me in the eye, I cant can I, we are in too differnt worlds, though what does that matter you are friend, one I trust....though that word sounds strange when said aloud by me...with you at least it is something...that is true...take care ok.
Karl |
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