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Bleed
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:41:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ice cold blade slice through my flesh
Hoping all my problems left
Warm blood spills from in my veins
Burning, throbbing new found pains
Lick the blood to clean my wound
Hiding deep within my room
Carving deeper every day
Bleeding all my pain away
Suicide runs through my mind
Who knows tonight may be my time
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EternalNight4x
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2004-11-09 13:41:15]
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Re: Bleed
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:46:08 PM AEST
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Blood it's not just a game it's a way of life for thoses who cut to take pain away I like the line "Ice cold blade slice through my flesh" Your words remind me of myself and how i to cut the pain away "NICW WRITE" EternalNight4x.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Bleed
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by _Raspberry_ on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:19:03 PM AEST
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| I am forced to agree with Lemmen. Good Write! |
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Re: Bleed
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:40:45 PM AEST
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definetely belongs under 'Suicide' poetry... you did such a good job. I completely understand what a hell you are going through. Just keep your head up high.
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Re: Bleed
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:38:29 PM AEST
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that was my plan tonight! ... kind of didn't happen though, or maybe im just living dead... mmm, yeah, proberly some thing like that.
excellent poem by the way!
it really reached out to me! |
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Re: Bleed
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:09:08 PM AEST
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i can relate to this all too well....its like you took this from straight out of my mind....if you ever need to talk to someone PM me or IM me at x0xbabydancerx0x....awesome poem....you expressed the pain so well....great job
Lots of Love
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