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and take this mask from my face
suicide on my mind... it's so hard to heal
and a lot harder to feel
so instead I cut out my soul
just to feel a little control
I know they are going to put me back in there
it doesn't matter to them
they wouldn't care
they are just there to do their job
to get a little money in their pockets
and hear you sob
It's so hard to put the blade away
because I think about it everyday
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Everyday

Contributed by screwup on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:12:52 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

It's so hard to fall back in place
and take this mask from my face
suicide on my mind... it's so hard to heal
and a lot harder to feel
so instead I cut out my soul
just to feel a little control
I know they are going to put me back in there
it doesn't matter to them
they wouldn't care
they are just there to do their job
to get a little money in their pockets
and hear you sob
It's so hard to put the blade away
because I think about it everyday

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Re: Everyday (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:18:03 AM AEST
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it must have been hell for you...i hope your still insane...the only honest people we have left in this country....i know...weird insight...i love this write....gives us a look at something alot of us will never expierence....btw..do people really throw themselves against padded walls with straight jackets on..or is that a different place???

blessed be
sirena

Re: Everyday (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:51:47 AM AEST
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Hey Babe...
Not sure on how to comment... I know that place was hell for u... and I'm glad ur out of there...
Plz try so hard to take life one day at a time... and put down the blade... try and find and then deal with the root of ur prob... I know it's not gonna be easy...
love ya...
~Donna~

Re: Everyday (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:49:44 AM AEST
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deep! I hope you are doing alright! take one day at a time and remember you still have a pen or a pencil and paper to write down what is going on in your mind!
* hugs *

blessed be
~ :: darkangeleyes57 :: ~

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