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[aid] => mick
[title] => Please Make My Pain Stop
[time] => 2004-11-09 09:50:04
[hometext] => please take my pain away...
[bodytext] => Please can you help my pain to stop?
As from out of the sky I’m about to drop,
Free fall all the way back down to the ground,
Please help me tell me you’ll always be around.
Although I am happy in love I am still depressed,
Still my soul in black is dressed,
Why won’t my pain & heartache just leave?
Over & over again me it deceives.
Just when I think it has finally left,
In it runs looking all wind swept
Draining me making me feel like I’m dying,
It hurts me then leaves me alone crying.
I am sick of feeling like I am alone,
Don’t feel wanted by you when we’re on our own,
I feel like you punish me for my past,
Like I have some hole inside me that’s vast.
I just want to be allowed to enjoy our relationship,
Never on reality or you I want to lose my grip,
It hurts does my pain, hurts me so much,
With our happiness I don’t want to lose touch.
Why has pain picked me to haunt,
In my face it’s power does it flaunt,
Have I been that bad a person to deserve this?
I am still suffering from depressions kiss.
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[score] => 14
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SadPoetry
)
Please Make My Pain Stop
Contributed by
pixie
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:50:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Please can you help my pain to stop?
As from out of the sky I’m about to drop,
Free fall all the way back down to the ground,
Please help me tell me you’ll always be around.
Although I am happy in love I am still depressed,
Still my soul in black is dressed,
Why won’t my pain & heartache just leave?
Over & over again me it deceives.
Just when I think it has finally left,
In it runs looking all wind swept
Draining me making me feel like I’m dying,
It hurts me then leaves me alone crying.
I am sick of feeling like I am alone,
Don’t feel wanted by you when we’re on our own,
I feel like you punish me for my past,
Like I have some hole inside me that’s vast.
I just want to be allowed to enjoy our relationship,
Never on reality or you I want to lose my grip,
It hurts does my pain, hurts me so much,
With our happiness I don’t want to lose touch.
Why has pain picked me to haunt,
In my face it’s power does it flaunt,
Have I been that bad a person to deserve this?
I am still suffering from depressions kiss.
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pixie
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2004-11-09 09:50:04]
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Re: Please Make My Pain Stop
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by alexb on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:52:49 AM AEST
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| very emotional and sad, i liked it a lot |
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Re: Please Make My Pain Stop
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:59:08 AM AEST
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This is so powerful and sad. I feel the same way. Cheer up Pixie.
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Re: Please Make My Pain Stop
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:03:23 AM AEST
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| wrote a poem for ya..... hope you get to feeling better. love ya sandy |
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Re: Please Make My Pain Stop
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:09:04 AM AEST
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| An amazing write, as always... So emotional. Like all your poems, it's very well worded... A thoroughly enjoyable read. |
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Re: Please Make My Pain Stop
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:18:21 AM AEST
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Depression can be a never ending struggle. I know. Are you getting some professional help? I know that I have learned to have some measure of control over mine, and the ups and downs have smoothed some. It's a long process, and you have to really want it, but I believe depression can be overcome.
Stitch |
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Re: Please Make My Pain Stop
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:30:46 AM AEST
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I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOU'RE POEM... NOT THAT I ENJOYED READING THAT YOU ARE DEPRESSED BUT THEY YOU EXPRESSED YOU'RE EMOTIONS, YOU LET YOU'RE READERS FEEL WHAT YOU ARE GOING THRO..
GREAT POEM
HeNO
UnKnOwN BuTtErfLY |
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Re: Please Make My Pain Stop
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:38:28 AM AEST
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A cry for help your words paint a picture of sadness and pain. hopefully some day we all might see it go away I liked this write pixie you have talent you express your self very well Keep on writing
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Please Make My Pain Stop
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:48:26 AM AEST
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Pixie, I don't think we ever entirely get away from depression. A word, a comment, a negative poke in the back can bring it all back sometimes. The most I've been able to do is let it out, then go and feed yourself with something that makes you feel more positive: A great comedy, a beautiful sunset, a hug. Find what makes you feel absolutely great no matter what and keep it a regular part of your life.
That downward spiral skews everything sometimes, I know. Unfortunately, in the end we gotta learn to feed ourselves the positive vibes because neediness tends to drive people away. You're alone in the sense that you hold the controls, but not alone in that other people are going through the exact same thing.
Hugs! |
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