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Array ( [sid] => 7073 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Supposition [time] => 2002-11-20 09:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the tank has gone empty on means to my end
what's left is a way missing something that's there
so i'm stuck in this moment but not near forever
with patience in time to circumstance i'm unaware

an artist, a poet
he shys away from life worth living
he held all his composure
and all the he could...
amounting nothing

so i wait in certainty that this thing will now pass
the dawning never comes and again i come last
last, last...

so he breaks down, and breaks out
he cries out to anyone who can start to listen
he held to a supposition
and all that he could...
amounting nothing

"he feels alone
his heart in his hand
he's alone
he feels alone
I feel...."

so he breaks down, and breaks out
he cries out to anyone who can start to listen
he held to a supposition
and all that he could...
amounting nothing

***
(11/19/02)
yes, another autobiographical sketch.
all of it true, all of it me. all of it nothing. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Supposition

Contributed by Daniel on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

the tank has gone empty on means to my end
what's left is a way missing something that's there
so i'm stuck in this moment but not near forever
with patience in time to circumstance i'm unaware

an artist, a poet
he shys away from life worth living
he held all his composure
and all the he could...
amounting nothing

so i wait in certainty that this thing will now pass
the dawning never comes and again i come last
last, last...

so he breaks down, and breaks out
he cries out to anyone who can start to listen
he held to a supposition
and all that he could...
amounting nothing

"he feels alone
his heart in his hand
he's alone
he feels alone
I feel...."

so he breaks down, and breaks out
he cries out to anyone who can start to listen
he held to a supposition
and all that he could...
amounting nothing

***
(11/19/02)
yes, another autobiographical sketch.
all of it true, all of it me. all of it nothing.

Copyright Â© Daniel ... [ 2002-11-20 09:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Supposition (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:45:29 PM AEST
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Come on, Cutie...you got to fill up that tank once more and get going....you are not alone.. Pick up your guitar and sing to me, baby!!!
Miss Jenni :>)

Re: Supposition (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:24:28 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful song Daniel
One day your going to be a song
writer that's published and it's going
to be the most amazing thing you
ever felt, Thanks for sharing
You write beautiful music
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

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