Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 14:11:21 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 7070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Dreaming [time] => 2002-11-20 08:20:00 [hometext] => Like the poem says I am stuck so help if you can or just put in what you would do whatever. Thanks [bodytext] => Once again your stuck
On what to do
I ahve a crush
But this one is different
You go to bed every night
Dreaming about him
You wake up every moring
Thinking about him
You wear his necklace
Everyday
But there is one problem
He doesnt know
Why?
Because you are friends
With his sister
What would you do
What would she do
Whould she say fine
I'm happy for you
Or will she get mad at you
There is only one way to know
But if it is bad
And she is going to get mad
I dont wanna try
I dont wanna lose a friend
But still every night
You go to bed
With him on your mind
And dream about what could happen
Man what do I do
There is two things
That I can do
First I can
Go for the crush
And hope to keep the friend
Or do the one you dont
Think you can do
Just keep the friend
And hope in the furture
You can just forget
About the crush
You dream about.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lolly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Dreaming

Contributed by lolly on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Once again your stuck
On what to do
I ahve a crush
But this one is different
You go to bed every night
Dreaming about him
You wake up every moring
Thinking about him
You wear his necklace
Everyday
But there is one problem
He doesnt know
Why?
Because you are friends
With his sister
What would you do
What would she do
Whould she say fine
I'm happy for you
Or will she get mad at you
There is only one way to know
But if it is bad
And she is going to get mad
I dont wanna try
I dont wanna lose a friend
But still every night
You go to bed
With him on your mind
And dream about what could happen
Man what do I do
There is two things
That I can do
First I can
Go for the crush
And hope to keep the friend
Or do the one you dont
Think you can do
Just keep the friend
And hope in the furture
You can just forget
About the crush
You dream about.

Copyright Â© lolly ... [ 2002-11-20 08:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:17:57 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow its tough,I cant help you out,If you really like this person,dont give up! Christina

Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:13:10 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I say follow your heart all the way
a true friend will not leave your side
they might get angry but they will
stick by you in the end, Thanks for
sharing this one it reminded me
of alot of things in my past, Keep
em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:24:51 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

"follow your heart and eventually you'll get things right" -divit great poem, hard situation to be in, but you'll know what to do.

Lindsey

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com