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Array ( [sid] => 70699 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Wind that Blows [time] => 2004-11-08 20:57:28 [hometext] => it sort of reminds me of a wiccan chant [bodytext] => She is dancing
Dancing dancing
In the wind that blows
And blows
And all the stars
And stars above
Glance down at her below
Below them the girl is dancing
Dancing without a care
A care in the world
Running free like the wind
That blows and blows through her hair
As she goes and goes
Around the circle once again
Again a crow hears her singing
Singing to the stars
The stars above listen down below
To hear the voices as they grow
Grow high up into the sky
Into the sky the crow carries the voices up
Up to where the stars all lie
Lying looking down below
To the crowd of witches and the crows
Dancing in the wind that blows
The music through the air
Dancing dancing
She is dancing
And now she stands alone
The air stands still
The crows in the air
And the stars have all gone.
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The Wind that Blows

Contributed by ZiltzWiltz on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:57:28 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

She is dancing
Dancing dancing
In the wind that blows
And blows
And all the stars
And stars above
Glance down at her below
Below them the girl is dancing
Dancing without a care
A care in the world
Running free like the wind
That blows and blows through her hair
As she goes and goes
Around the circle once again
Again a crow hears her singing
Singing to the stars
The stars above listen down below
To hear the voices as they grow
Grow high up into the sky
Into the sky the crow carries the voices up
Up to where the stars all lie
Lying looking down below
To the crowd of witches and the crows
Dancing in the wind that blows
The music through the air
Dancing dancing
She is dancing
And now she stands alone
The air stands still
The crows in the air
And the stars have all gone.

Copyright © ZiltzWiltz ... [ 2004-11-08 20:57:28]
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Re: The Wind that Blows (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:39:17 AM AEST
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I saw and heard so many images and sounds in my mind from your poem.

Lyrics, dancing, music boxes, soft piano and it was rich and I just really liked the whole feel of this poem.

I could go on and on but i'll spare you!

Kie

Re: The Wind that Blows (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:32:53 PM AEST
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you took me to a past i can only feel....amazing power here.....

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