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Array ( [sid] => 70698 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Say No More [time] => 2004-11-08 20:54:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Being mad gives whole new perspective
to what brain feels as confusion
lapped up inbetween spills
of what's ultimately
worth keeping

Feeling hurt enables
the anger
to slide down the throat
of vein channel paths
too narrow
to understand what I wrote

Breathing heavily and slow
kills the vomit
that wants to flow
everytime I feel so pathetic
falling from oh so high
to low

And invalid here seems to
cross over more often than it should
allowed like normal
and pretended to feel good

I say No More, No More
but I am unable to stop
I am unable to breathe
My face is too hot
and painful feels worth it
and I like it a lot

Or so I tell me
when I see the rain on my face
I'm running invisible
like a ghost in a race
Running to lose time
in my favorite place

I have to admit
I'm losing my faith...............
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Red_October [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I Say No More

Contributed by Red_October on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:54:41 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Being mad gives whole new perspective
to what brain feels as confusion
lapped up inbetween spills
of what's ultimately
worth keeping

Feeling hurt enables
the anger
to slide down the throat
of vein channel paths
too narrow
to understand what I wrote

Breathing heavily and slow
kills the vomit
that wants to flow
everytime I feel so pathetic
falling from oh so high
to low

And invalid here seems to
cross over more often than it should
allowed like normal
and pretended to feel good

I say No More, No More
but I am unable to stop
I am unable to breathe
My face is too hot
and painful feels worth it
and I like it a lot

Or so I tell me
when I see the rain on my face
I'm running invisible
like a ghost in a race
Running to lose time
in my favorite place

I have to admit
I'm losing my faith...............

Copyright © Red_October ... [ 2004-11-08 20:54:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Say No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:01:42 PM AEST
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great write.

Re: I Say No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 11:40:25 PM AEST
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awesome, i love it, great write!!!

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