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Array ( [sid] => 70674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Killing me Inside [time] => 2004-11-08 18:44:04 [hometext] => Ok this poem is based off of how I feel on the inside. Ive never cut myself just for the record. but thats all thanks to my writting. i want some serious comments on this poem please! [bodytext] => I feel like I could slit my wrist
And not think twice about it.
I wanna die instead of suffering life.
It can’t possibly move on
I take a knife like I would a pencil
And use it to express my pain
I cut myself at the sound of thunder
And blood pours to the floor like rain
I take a blade and slit my throat
Now everyone can see my internal tears
But these tears aren’t tears but tears of blood
And as I fall to the floor it smears
Now I feel no pain at all
As I see my friends and family cry
I see my close friends slit their wrists
And soon I know they’ll die.
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Killing me Inside

Contributed by alwayslost on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:44:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I feel like I could slit my wrist
And not think twice about it.
I wanna die instead of suffering life.
It can’t possibly move on
I take a knife like I would a pencil
And use it to express my pain
I cut myself at the sound of thunder
And blood pours to the floor like rain
I take a blade and slit my throat
Now everyone can see my internal tears
But these tears aren’t tears but tears of blood
And as I fall to the floor it smears
Now I feel no pain at all
As I see my friends and family cry
I see my close friends slit their wrists
And soon I know they’ll die.

Copyright Â© alwayslost ... [ 2004-11-08 18:44:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Killing me Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessa_Lee on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:59:58 PM AEST
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This was very well written....I'm happy that you don't cut yourself, you write instead to let your feelings out. I have cut myself...and its a bad road to be on. Keep writing though, your really good.

Re: Killing me Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:28:38 AM AEST
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awesome, i love it.. im a cutter and this is almost exactly how i feel

Re: Killing me Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:25:33 AM AEST
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You said in your opeing statement you don't cut, you found that writing keeps you from doing it I agree 100%. I myself am a cutter but my writing dose curve the urge to cut. your poem was very well written I could see your sadness and feel the pain of this write
""GOOD JOB"" alwayslost.

~~DENNIS~~

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