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Array ( [sid] => 70667 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Do I Do? [time] => 2004-11-08 17:57:50 [hometext] => I ****ed up again and this time there is no turning back [bodytext] => Just don't know what to do anymore
With this life laid out, thrown on the floor
I can't make descions
Or find my way
My choices seem all wrong
Living day by day
I try to plan ahead
And make a life worth living
But I can't take anymore of this ****
Inside the pressure is digging
Digging a hole deep into my chest
A hole where I can hide
Sick of trying
Sick of redieing
Just don't know what to do

Don't know where to go anymore
Who to trust
Or who to love
Sick of the pain
That's overflowing
In my life of Human Waste
Confused and Twisted
Don't know what to do
Don't know what to do with myself or with you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Alina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

What Do I Do?

Contributed by Alina on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:57:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Just don't know what to do anymore
With this life laid out, thrown on the floor
I can't make descions
Or find my way
My choices seem all wrong
Living day by day
I try to plan ahead
And make a life worth living
But I can't take anymore of this ****
Inside the pressure is digging
Digging a hole deep into my chest
A hole where I can hide
Sick of trying
Sick of redieing
Just don't know what to do

Don't know where to go anymore
Who to trust
Or who to love
Sick of the pain
That's overflowing
In my life of Human Waste
Confused and Twisted
Don't know what to do
Don't know what to do with myself or with you.

Copyright © Alina ... [ 2004-11-08 17:57:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:01:38 PM AEST
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talk about a great display of emotion!

Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by TedHuggableBare on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:09:46 PM AEST
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Life can be a puzzle in which we continue to try to piece it together. May you find all of the pieces not missing so you can complete the puzzle to have a beautiful picture/ending.

Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:55:06 PM AEST
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this is put greatly...

Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by subgenius on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:55:56 PM AEST
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You did exactly what you should have done; write a poem about it!

Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:52:11 PM AEST
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I know you're going thru
something serious.
But I have to say I admire
how you turned out a compelling poem
from all of this, and hope your
Poet's mind will help you thru all
of this.

I can't pretend I know any
good advice. But I hope
you make it thru it all.

--Mothy

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