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Array ( [sid] => 70649 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2004-11-08 16:18:38 [hometext] => To someone whom i admire greatly. He`ll never know how i feel.. :- [bodytext] => Your the kind of beauty that ive never before felt,
Inside and out, in your presence i melt.
Your eyes have in them what ive always searched for,
Captivating beauty, and oh so much more.
You give me hope for a future thats brighter
You make my darkness seem so much lighter.
I watch as you smile your unassuming grin
I sit calmly, but inside my stomach spins.
Every little word that you speak
Leaves my knees wobbly and my heart so weak.
Its always you thats on my lonely mind
Your love is the only thing i`ve been looking to find
So will i ever be the apple of your eye?
Or will i be without your love untill the day i die? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 33 [informant] => EVERxSOxSWEET [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Untitled

Contributed by EVERxSOxSWEET on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 04:18:38 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Your the kind of beauty that ive never before felt,
Inside and out, in your presence i melt.
Your eyes have in them what ive always searched for,
Captivating beauty, and oh so much more.
You give me hope for a future thats brighter
You make my darkness seem so much lighter.
I watch as you smile your unassuming grin
I sit calmly, but inside my stomach spins.
Every little word that you speak
Leaves my knees wobbly and my heart so weak.
Its always you thats on my lonely mind
Your love is the only thing i`ve been looking to find
So will i ever be the apple of your eye?
Or will i be without your love untill the day i die?

Copyright © EVERxSOxSWEET ... [ 2004-11-08 16:18:38]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by llamaluver on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 04:27:41 PM AEST
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I really identify to this poem. I feel the same way about a guy who doesnt know that I feel that way about him.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by N0body on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:53:08 PM AEST
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This poem flows really well.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:50:28 PM AEST
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Awesome poem...is this about the junior you have been telling me about?

Word,
Mason

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 11:09:43 PM AEST
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This is a really good Poem I can relate to it so much, but I've tried to stop loving him but that did no work out lol well anyways Great Write I enjoyed it !!!

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