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Array ( [sid] => 70643 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Carefree [time] => 2004-11-08 15:53:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The other day
I saw a girl
Who looked a lot like me
Except for the look on her face
She looked so carefree
Then I realized
I've become so sad
So angry
Now I'm just confused
What made me
Lose my fire?
What made me see the world
With this different sight?
The girl I saw
The other day
Was only in my dreams
She was me
How I used to be
So
Carefree [comments] => 4 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 48 [informant] => llamaluver [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Carefree

Contributed by llamaluver on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:53:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The other day
I saw a girl
Who looked a lot like me
Except for the look on her face
She looked so carefree
Then I realized
I've become so sad
So angry
Now I'm just confused
What made me
Lose my fire?
What made me see the world
With this different sight?
The girl I saw
The other day
Was only in my dreams
She was me
How I used to be
So
Carefree

Copyright © llamaluver ... [ 2004-11-08 15:53:07]
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Re: Carefree (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:10:59 PM AEST
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i love this.....i wanted it to be longer......

Re: Carefree (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:27:07 PM AEST
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very cool
thanks for sharing.

Re: Carefree (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:07:07 PM AEST
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Nice write. It seems to say exactly what you want it to. My dreams are sometimes the darker side of me and sometimes the lighter side, depending on stress level. You could write a sequel to this about what you decide to do about it - if you haven't already. Cheers!

Re: Carefree (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:15:19 AM AEST
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that was a short and sweet poem.i wish i was carefree to.im always so angry.but i wanted to say that that poem desribed me so much.i loved that poem so keep writing.
sinned

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