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Array ( [sid] => 70621 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Computer Generated Lunchroom [time] => 2004-11-08 13:04:02 [hometext] => Here's the deal, the realization that I have no real friends anymore, has driven me to spending my lunch periods in the computer lab... [bodytext] => Quiet dark hallways,
nothing is here.
All else is running,
as I go near.

I can't help but be stung,
by your words and your pain.
Leaving the norm,
my only friend is the rain.

Robots on keyboards,
food left long ago.
Scars left unhealed,
far more then you know.

Mouses click pages,
and typing up a lost dream.
No matter where I go now,
so empty I seem.

Computer generated lunchrooms,
I file in without a sound.
No friends by my side,
I fall to the ground. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 43 [informant] => 2ndChance [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Computer Generated Lunchroom

Contributed by 2ndChance on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:04:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Quiet dark hallways,
nothing is here.
All else is running,
as I go near.

I can't help but be stung,
by your words and your pain.
Leaving the norm,
my only friend is the rain.

Robots on keyboards,
food left long ago.
Scars left unhealed,
far more then you know.

Mouses click pages,
and typing up a lost dream.
No matter where I go now,
so empty I seem.

Computer generated lunchrooms,
I file in without a sound.
No friends by my side,
I fall to the ground.

Copyright © 2ndChance ... [ 2004-11-08 13:04:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Computer Generated Lunchroom (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:02:55 PM AEST
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Good write...I can identify...
Jenni

Re: Computer Generated Lunchroom (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:14:04 AM AEST
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I love you babe! Great write....I know what you mean...unfortuantly I CAN'T spend my lunch period anywhere but the lunchroom =/ oh well. Great writeThee

Re: Computer Generated Lunchroom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:30:43 PM AEST
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Well I didn't have any (offline) when I started school, and whether it's the lunchroom or computer room I'll probably be there alone. The one real friend I had isn't going this semester. :-( But you expressed the lonliness well. Cheers!

Re: Computer Generated Lunchroom (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:35:02 AM AEST
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brilliant and well expressed.

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