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[aid] => mick
[title] => Looking out my window
[time] => 2004-11-08 10:35:35
[hometext] => About a life taken for granted... until it's gone... Please leave comments... I would really like to know what you think of my poem... bad or otherwise... didn't know what kind it would be so I guessed
[bodytext] => Looking out her window At the life she knew before The life she threw away For the one that she adored He showed her life beyond what she knew But now she misses the life she once knew The life she gave up for him When he gave up nothing for her She only knew what she wanted never what she had And when she got what she wanted It didn't seem to bad It was her dream come true But after she's had it for all of these years She realizes it's not what she thought This life she has dreamed up Has become a nightmare Looking threw the window To a life she once knew A life she used to take for granted But now she charishes with all her heart Oh how she wants her life back But to leave him would be so painful He's everything she thought she wanted But nothing to her now To look at him and see his eyes Looking back at her Makes her shiver all over Just knowing he's looking back at her She knows he knows she wants to leave But he would never let her go He would kill a soul who helped her Her life has become his own So she looks out her window At a life she once knew Hoping beyond hope She will get to be a part of it once more [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 21 [informant] => jishes_4_ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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