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Array ( [sid] => 70545 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Numb-- [time] => 2004-11-07 19:19:33 [hometext] => You'll probably see a poem of mine very similar to this eventually. I've been trying to make a poem with this type of ending, but this is all I've got so far. [bodytext] => It’s going to be great
It’s going to be fine
There’s never been a problem
The reason’s held behind
I can’t find my place
There’s no emotion on my face
I think the moment’s finally come
I pick up the blade
My whole body goes numb

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Numb--

Contributed by acidicblasphemy on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 07:19:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



It’s going to be great
It’s going to be fine
There’s never been a problem
The reason’s held behind
I can’t find my place
There’s no emotion on my face
I think the moment’s finally come
I pick up the blade
My whole body goes numb





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Re: Numb-- (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:53:15 PM AEST
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what you have here is very good.

"It’s going to be great
It’s going to be fine
There’s never been a problem"

this seems kind of unrealistic though to what it leads to. i could be wrong of course, but i dont know. its your opinion that matters after all. keep up the great work. =]


Re: Numb-- (User Rating: 1 )
by acidicblasphemy on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:46:26 PM AEST
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"It’s going to be great
It’s going to be fine
There’s never been a problem"

It means there's never been a problem as in there has never been, not there isn't at this exact time.


Re: Numb-- (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 06:31:15 PM AEST
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Powerful write,
Was it numb from the realization of what was about to take place. At that particular moment




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