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Array ( [sid] => 70523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Variations on a Theme [time] => 2004-11-07 16:29:59 [hometext] => loved and lost....again [bodytext] => _______________________________
Close encounter when we passed
Touched by lightening
Shrunken souls
Harried by the wind
Lifting my skirt
You’ve been there before
Drowning in sorrows
Of your own making
I danced in your arms
Until sin wormed its way in between us
Chilled your lips
Burdened by kissing
Sweet words withered
Into hissing lies
That boiled over into arguments
Transparent alibis
I never wanted this ending
Fevered dreams and tears
My mind is playing tricks on me
Wounded heart bleeds
As if it never felt before
Variations on a theme [comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 22 [informant] => merry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Variations on a Theme

Contributed by merry on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

_______________________________
Close encounter when we passed
Touched by lightening
Shrunken souls
Harried by the wind
Lifting my skirt
You’ve been there before
Drowning in sorrows
Of your own making
I danced in your arms
Until sin wormed its way in between us
Chilled your lips
Burdened by kissing
Sweet words withered
Into hissing lies
That boiled over into arguments
Transparent alibis
I never wanted this ending
Fevered dreams and tears
My mind is playing tricks on me
Wounded heart bleeds
As if it never felt before
Variations on a theme

Copyright Â© merry ... [ 2004-11-07 16:29:59]
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Re: Variations on a Theme (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:40:29 PM AEST
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I never wanted this ending

Who does? Or maybe it's the beginning we really didn't want. Another insightful and fascinating write.
Stitch

Re: Variations on a Theme (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:53:13 PM AEST
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Sometimes life throws bricks. Merry, this is excellent.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: Variations on a Theme (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:59:45 PM AEST
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ohhh Gaille...this one tears at the heart. Love is born..and love dies.
You are truly a gifted writer.
Roses for my daisy
Larry

Re: Variations on a Theme (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:09:41 AM AEST
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You're every letter as incredible as I wish I was!!! Great write..

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