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Array ( [sid] => 70505 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Wish For One Day Could... [time] => 2004-11-07 13:40:31 [hometext] => I hate the way people are so quick to judge without looking inside of the lives they like to think they can pick apart and analyzie. [bodytext] => I wish for one day you could
Stumble blindly through my life
The days all blend in a haze
I wish for one day you could feel the pain
The way it burns me everyday
I want you to know
That no matter how hard you try
And how much you think you know
You don't truly know me

I wish for one day you could feel my failure, feel it when they scream
And the hatered it causes that I keep bottled up inside of me
I wish you could taste my tears, count them as they fall
Learn what it feels like to be a "misguided youth"
And have no place to run to at all

I wish for one day you could feel so scared, lost, and alone
I wish for one day you knew my past
And knew my darkest days
I wish for one day you had to ask yourself,
"Where do I belong?"
I wish that you could count my failures,
I hope my life takes you over
What would you feel like if your dreams shattered constantly,
If your failure screamed at you,
If your pain burned the inside of you,
And you couldn't help but hate yourself and stumble blindly through the days?

I wish for one day you could...
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I Wish For One Day Could...

Contributed by Katie2008 on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:40:31 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I wish for one day you could
Stumble blindly through my life
The days all blend in a haze
I wish for one day you could feel the pain
The way it burns me everyday
I want you to know
That no matter how hard you try
And how much you think you know
You don't truly know me

I wish for one day you could feel my failure, feel it when they scream
And the hatered it causes that I keep bottled up inside of me
I wish you could taste my tears, count them as they fall
Learn what it feels like to be a "misguided youth"
And have no place to run to at all

I wish for one day you could feel so scared, lost, and alone
I wish for one day you knew my past
And knew my darkest days
I wish for one day you had to ask yourself,
"Where do I belong?"
I wish that you could count my failures,
I hope my life takes you over
What would you feel like if your dreams shattered constantly,
If your failure screamed at you,
If your pain burned the inside of you,
And you couldn't help but hate yourself and stumble blindly through the days?

I wish for one day you could...




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Re: I Wish For One Day Could... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:49:21 PM AEST
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yes this life is full of judgemental people, i think we have been judged by people who know very little about ut. very good write,

takecare,
pixie xx


Re: I Wish For One Day Could... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:10:49 PM AEST
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Very impressive!
Very full of emotion with great flow from begining to end.
And I agree with the content 100%
Nice job!


Re: I Wish For One Day Could... (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:37:41 PM AEST
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I LOVE YOU!!!! remember that... so do bee, and kayla, and EVERYONE ELSE!!!! i'd be LOST without u...




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