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Array ( [sid] => 70438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WHat you dont want to see [time] => 2004-11-06 23:14:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My face,
My skin,
My body,
My bones,
Forever mine,
Never new,
Always old,
Just plain bronze,
Never gold,
A piece of mush,
The mirror brakes,
When I touch my face,
The whole world quakes,
Tainted, ugly,
Black and blue,
It’d kill a man,
You know it’s true,
Don’t need to lie,
Don’t need to praise,
Don’t need to continue,
Your half scared glaze,
Just turn away,
Just like before,
I couldn’t ask,
For very much more,
This is my face,
Will always be,
Another piece of myself,
You won’t want to see
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => corrupted_minds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

WHat you dont want to see

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:14:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My face,
My skin,
My body,
My bones,
Forever mine,
Never new,
Always old,
Just plain bronze,
Never gold,
A piece of mush,
The mirror brakes,
When I touch my face,
The whole world quakes,
Tainted, ugly,
Black and blue,
It’d kill a man,
You know it’s true,
Don’t need to lie,
Don’t need to praise,
Don’t need to continue,
Your half scared glaze,
Just turn away,
Just like before,
I couldn’t ask,
For very much more,
This is my face,
Will always be,
Another piece of myself,
You won’t want to see

Copyright Â© corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-11-06 23:14:47]
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Re: WHat you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:21:09 PM AEST
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Very powerfull message but I think in the right cicumstances we all would.
I jus pray I never have to go there.
Very honest write.
good explantion of ones innervision.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: WHat you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:16:48 AM AEST
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a very good style you got there

Re: WHat you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:38:06 AM AEST
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such a sad write. always remember that you are
beautiful.

love always, dizza
xoxoxoxox

Re: WHat you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by happybunnyfan on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:37:43 AM AEST
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i love it. it's what everybocy thinks. just know looks don't count it's what's on the inside that counts.
great write

Re: WHat you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:16:49 AM AEST
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awww this is very sad and deep, sorry you feel like this,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: WHat you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:44:41 PM AEST
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I bet you are a beautiful person. It doesn't matter what others think. Great poem, awesome style.

Spazzo

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