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What would’ve happened if there was no one to show
Him where he has to get off? I wonder if he
Even knows the address at which he has to be
A palm pilot and a voice louder than the noise of the subway
Make him look comical, but he doesn’t care
And New Yorkers won’t laugh, they are used to
Trying to get their point through to a person who’s lost
This guy isn’t scary, but as he yells out
People politely smile and explain what the train map is all about [comments] => 4 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 25 [informant] => New_York_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

A Confused Passenger

Contributed by New_York_Chick on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:52:50 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

He got onto the train he didn’t know
What would’ve happened if there was no one to show
Him where he has to get off? I wonder if he
Even knows the address at which he has to be
A palm pilot and a voice louder than the noise of the subway
Make him look comical, but he doesn’t care
And New Yorkers won’t laugh, they are used to
Trying to get their point through to a person who’s lost
This guy isn’t scary, but as he yells out
People politely smile and explain what the train map is all about

Copyright © New_York_Chick ... [ 2004-11-06 22:52:50]
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Re: A Confused Passenger (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:03:05 PM AEST
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Good write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: A Confused Passenger (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:58:53 AM AEST
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New York was cool...very accepting I found . My grandaughter loved it for the many starbucks.. I love it because mentally ill people fit in..who can tell? lol great write!!!

Re: A Confused Passenger (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:45:21 AM AEST
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LMAO that is why you always have to take a New yorker with you if your going in the subway cuz you really do get easily lost in New York. Lovely write.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: A Confused Passenger (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:38:34 AM AEST
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:-)
Makes me want to visit New york!

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