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Array ( [sid] => 70428 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Perfectly Kept Secret [time] => 2004-11-06 21:59:05 [hometext] => one of my new ones on the old topic i don't have those feelings anymore but it was funny to try to capture them after they're gone [bodytext] => My perfectly kept secret
Do you know that you still are
The only one I'm wishing for
On that distant star

All the talk about you
Everyone wanted to be more than a friend
I never admitted to it
Cause before the beginning came the end

Yeah they're all guessing
I am still not quiet over like I said
But who are they to claim you
They wasted their chance and that's too bad

Today I might not need you
But a day will soon come
When I'm willing to do everything
To be your only one [comments] => 5 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 48 [informant] => New_York_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Perfectly Kept Secret

Contributed by New_York_Chick on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:59:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My perfectly kept secret
Do you know that you still are
The only one I'm wishing for
On that distant star

All the talk about you
Everyone wanted to be more than a friend
I never admitted to it
Cause before the beginning came the end

Yeah they're all guessing
I am still not quiet over like I said
But who are they to claim you
They wasted their chance and that's too bad

Today I might not need you
But a day will soon come
When I'm willing to do everything
To be your only one

Copyright © New_York_Chick ... [ 2004-11-06 21:59:05]
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Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:18:22 PM AEST
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Wow. such a message filled with emotion which makes your created poem here Perfection. I want to Thank You for sharing yourself and your awesome talent with myself and other readers. Please keep your ink flowing so your wonderful poems keep growing. Your Newest Reading Fan MickeyPigKnuckles :o)

Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:28:27 PM AEST
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awesome

Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:51:25 AM AEST
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Well I'm glad u captured them cause this is a great write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:38:21 AM AEST
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new_york_girl

You have a way about you.
Words ringing truth.
I liked this poem,
but could have been better done.
A little more time.
A little more ryme,
but who am I ?
To question why.

Sinned

Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Cindy359 on Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 05:29:43 PM AEST
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This is beautifully written..

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