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Array ( [sid] => 70416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Actors In A Play [time] => 2004-11-06 20:16:09 [hometext] => this poem has a mixed Message i hope its not too obvious but please do read and comment and tell me what you think [bodytext] => My hands act out a play on a paisley stage full of pinks and reds

A play in which my fingers play hide and seek

In a background that is really a sight to see

They split up and come together

They dance in circles and make curls with flowers

The roses and lilacs and daisies are in full bloom

They are real in this play not just some props

These actors act out their parts very well

Almost is if it were not pretend

Maybe in their eyes it is really not

Playing games in this crazy world

Trusting n a human heart when they know

It could fall apart and break so easily

This play is really personal my fingers are not

Puppets made of wood but made of flesh

Marionettes that I control

All five of them act just for you

Just for enjoyment in this game

They act so well you feel the lines

Penetrate deed into your soul

Making you feel things that you have not before

Things that you can not explain but yet you trust
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Actors In A Play

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:16:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



My hands act out a play on a paisley stage full of pinks and reds

A play in which my fingers play hide and seek

In a background that is really a sight to see

They split up and come together

They dance in circles and make curls with flowers

The roses and lilacs and daisies are in full bloom

They are real in this play not just some props

These actors act out their parts very well

Almost is if it were not pretend

Maybe in their eyes it is really not

Playing games in this crazy world

Trusting n a human heart when they know

It could fall apart and break so easily

This play is really personal my fingers are not

Puppets made of wood but made of flesh

Marionettes that I control

All five of them act just for you

Just for enjoyment in this game

They act so well you feel the lines

Penetrate deed into your soul

Making you feel things that you have not before

Things that you can not explain but yet you trust




Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-11-06 20:16:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Actors In A Play (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:22:40 PM AEST
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Well we all wonna trust but trust without respect first is not much good.
Great mysterious beggining.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Actors In A Play (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:41:03 PM AEST
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i agree with emy. excellent write.




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