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my own body,
knows me no longer

this virus thrives, under my skin
so sexual and flirty,
to men who look my way

this is not me!
not the way i am,
this is the stranger within me

who flows in my veins, tempting me
altering my minds program
plauging my eternal soul

so, step from me, shadow
and look into my eyes
show me your true form, and i will be set free

rid your filth from my blood stream
you are not, that i despise
clense me of this sin, bath my soul

for all you need be,
is a stranger to me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Stranger

Contributed by TwEeK on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:12:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i am a stranger to myself
my own body,
knows me no longer

this virus thrives, under my skin
so sexual and flirty,
to men who look my way

this is not me!
not the way i am,
this is the stranger within me

who flows in my veins, tempting me
altering my minds program
plauging my eternal soul

so, step from me, shadow
and look into my eyes
show me your true form, and i will be set free

rid your filth from my blood stream
you are not, that i despise
clense me of this sin, bath my soul

for all you need be,
is a stranger to me.

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-11-06 20:12:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:34:16 PM AEST
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rid your filth from my blood stream
you are not, that i despise
clense me of this sin, bath my soul

for all you need be,
is a stranger to me.
A masterpeice 2 all that read this as we alll can say the same and this wite is like unclocking a peice of your soul but u not only show how but u have a very wise write, here.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: The Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:43:08 PM AEST
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excellent write. presented very well.

Re: The Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:00:26 PM AEST
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I knew exactly what this poemmeant to me
as soon as i read it.Similar thoughts and feelings have been my life's reality for years..

Re: The Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:24:03 AM AEST
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brilliant write, wonderfully expressed,

pixie xx

Re: The Stranger (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:06:48 PM AEST
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