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~Open My Eyes~
Contributed by
Alina
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:12:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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They say that love is blind
But if it's love, it shouldn't be.....
Because if it is something true
Then you could see through to me
But you can't see through
the shades
That you pull over your eyes
You can't protect your heart
From your own secrets and lies
I don't want to be hurt
But it seems as if this relationship
is in disguise.
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They say I shouldn't fall for you
But I can't help what I feel
I know this isn't love
But I'm still blind
To something that I am hoping
Is real.?
Copyright ©
Alina
... [
2004-11-05 22:12:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~Open My Eyes~
(User Rating: 1 ) by hoist1atca on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:17:13 PM AEST (User
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Very well written words-
Full of the truth of the pain that love can cause-
Sometimes we are blind by the things that we hold close-
Search your own soul and go from there...
Joe |
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Re: ~Open My Eyes~
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:43:19 PM AEST (User
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Very good, powerfull masterpeice!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Hope u get your wish. |
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Re: ~Open My Eyes~
(User Rating: 1 ) by theMoth on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:54:00 PM AEST (User
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Another very
competent write!
Good use of seperating the stanzas.
Very effective.
--Mothy |
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