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-OK- With A Kiss
Contributed by
Alina
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:05:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If everything could be -ok-
When you kiss me?
Then your lips would never
Leave from upon mine
If everything could be -ok-
When you kiss me?
Then you'd stay with
Me all the time
If everything could be -ok-
When you kiss me?
Then I could never
Ever cry
But I only feel the pain
Because you left me
So when you kiss me.....
It feels like I've died.
Copyright ©
Alina
... [
2004-11-05 22:05:30]
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Re: -OK- With A Kiss
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by hoist1atca on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:25:12 PM AEST
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Very nice-
A kiss holds a thousand pleasures-
The loss of a kiss holds a thousand torments-
Sometimes:
So sweet the taste-
So bitter the bite...
Joe
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Re: -OK- With A Kiss
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 06:48:58 AM AEST
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a very good poem, when you do loose that special someone in your life it does feel like the end of the world. Like you said a kiss has been lost.
hugs,
Jane |
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Re: -OK- With A Kiss
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by pixie on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 06:51:27 AM AEST
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awww this is really sad, deep from your heart,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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