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''My Place is the Paper''
Contributed by
petet7777777
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:04:46 PM in AEST
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The only way you can tell how i feel is if you read between these blue lines, figure out these many signs, with all these kinds of designs and slick rhymes. This is where my feelings and emotions combine, from my mind, to hand, to paper, this is my place draper. Theres no place to go when im feeling low, but your'll never know, though, cause i started to flow, like im in a reality tv show, where everything i undergo doesn't stay low, its for world to know.
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Re: ''My Place is the Paper''
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by shadowsofmyheart on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:25:50 PM AEST
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it was hard to read in the format u chose, commas and no lines.
like
writeing
like
this.
i think you went a LIttle overbored witht he rymes and lost something in there
dont hate.
im just trying to help. |
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Re: ''My Place is the Paper''
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by twick on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:53:28 PM AEST
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| I really liked this it kind of reminded me of Saul Williams |
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