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Array ( [sid] => 70313 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silent Child [time] => 2004-11-05 21:20:56 [hometext] => this one is very oxymoronic...you have to really pay attention! but overall i like it... [bodytext] => I find comfort in silence.
Quiet child, everyone can hear you now.
Someone presses there hand
against your mouth,
you scream,
and the noise presses through.
They can't hear you anymore.
Noise is a cancer.
An undying nuisance, never to subside.
Come to me my dear, we will run and hide.
Does this make sense,
can you hear me shut my mouth.
I think you should come closer.
Feel the air on my tounge....
bleed with me,
curse with me.....
Oh an ode to laughter!!!
So quiet my child!
Will you not speak up?
Why are you so distorted?
Will you not twist my way?
Speak up my love...
I can't help but hear you.
Your voice is so quiet.
Oh Isis, the breeze is brutal!!!
I can't see her bright face,
speak up my love speak up!!!
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Sirena_Degana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
Silent Child

Contributed by Sirena_Degana on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:20:56 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



I find comfort in silence.
Quiet child, everyone can hear you now.
Someone presses there hand
against your mouth,
you scream,
and the noise presses through.
They can't hear you anymore.
Noise is a cancer.
An undying nuisance, never to subside.
Come to me my dear, we will run and hide.
Does this make sense,
can you hear me shut my mouth.
I think you should come closer.
Feel the air on my tounge....
bleed with me,
curse with me.....
Oh an ode to laughter!!!
So quiet my child!
Will you not speak up?
Why are you so distorted?
Will you not twist my way?
Speak up my love...
I can't help but hear you.
Your voice is so quiet.
Oh Isis, the breeze is brutal!!!
I can't see her bright face,
speak up my love speak up!!!




Copyright © Sirena_Degana ... [ 2004-11-05 21:20:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Silent Child (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:03:39 PM AEST
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great write. i guess you found out who stole your poems. =]


Re: Silent Child (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:21:01 PM AEST
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hey nice one i have a few like that u should read them well g2g bye



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Re: Silent Child (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 11:04:22 PM AEST
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awesome, i love it!!!


Re: Silent Child (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 06:55:37 AM AEST
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wow, what can I say, this is brilliant,

takecare,
pixie xx


Re: Silent Child (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:32:49 AM AEST
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this is incredible, a very enjoyable read.


Re: Silent Child (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:29:05 PM AEST
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awesome poem...i liked it alot...its different and interesting...great job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears




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